How could you kill him? He is the best in that book! Why? Well, it was a great story, nonetheless. Keep up the good work.
~Riku~

Awesome. Great now I am sounding like one of my stupid friends. Anyway, just telling you that I think it is pretty good so far. I am about to read chapter 2.
~Riku~

oh come on!! That ending SUCKED!! wat the hell happy happy happy -KILL FANG KILL FANG!! shakes head sadly wat were you smoking at the time?

WOW THT MADE ME CRY AND I HARDLY EVER CRY...IT WAS A RLLY GOOD STORY AND I'LL ADD IT TO MY FAV.S

WHAT!
NO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-!
Please, bring my baby back!
NO-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-!

AH! What the flippin' holy peanut butter was that?! Amazing story up until the end...I was so happy and I was jumping around the room screaming "THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER! THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER!" and then I sat down and read the rest and then all of the sudden I was jumping around the room screaming and CRYING! *sigh* oh well...I guess every story can't have a happy ending...though it woulda been cool for that one to! Great job...I don't like your endings though...LOL! great job! keep up the good work!

Very good. SLIPPEDAWAYSLIPPEDAWAY...and so on and so fourth.

you are so evil!
please update!
this is realy good!
ah!
you evil cliffie writer!
please update!
i'm begging you!

OH.My.Gosh! This is AMAZING! Post more, post more, post more! please...

Could you possibly write this without the song lyrics?? I really hate songfics and they're banned. So if you could rewrite this normally, it would be great.

I'm really liking this so far, and would love to see, er, read more. :^)

Oh, my gosh! It's Fang, isn't it?
I hope it is!!

I like the way you write Max's thoughts.

Post more! It's good!