Very good fic. Amsen sure was one crazy dude. Loved the plot.

haha i was just re-reading the story and i picked up on something. Ansem spelled backwards isn't mensa, it's mesna!! lol just something i found. Great story!!

This was really a great story! Very much in keeping with the Hardy Boys style. A great ride that I enjoyed very much. Thanks so much for sharing it, and I look forward to more stories in the future!

Hi, just wanted to say thanks for the great story! You're first! - well done; I'm glad it was a positive experience for you. It was very enjoyable and I hope to see you write more in the future. Good luck and enjoy your positive reviews... if you get the not so positive ones? that's when you think of all the people who love your stuff and try not to let the negatives get you down. I think everyone who writes gets a bad one from time to time and the trick is not to let it end your desire to write. We've all had it happen - I write under another pen name in the Stargate Atlantis world and they can suck your self esteem away.

I hope you always enjoy what you do and don't ever get soured by anyone.

Kind regards

bravo.

Very good job on your first HB fanfic, Time Guardian! I enjoyed the story, especially the very original plot twist of having Frank auctioned off to the highest bidder among the Hardy enemies! Sometimes it's hard to put a new and different spin on a kidnapping story but you did it wonderfully.

I do hope more story ideas pop into your head as I'd enjoy reading more from you.

Thanks for sharing this one with us. :)

That was a fun read! It read like one of the blue spines. Good work. I'll have to look up another of your stories if you ever do one. :)

Can't wait for the ending. It has been a really good story.

I love this story

Good thing Vanessa knows the Hardys well enough to know when to help out. She's a smart one, she is. :) Great work - keep it up!

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Frank must live. Frank must live. Frank must-i'm sorry, am i chanting? well, you get the picture.

oh no--you can't stop there! I want to know how it all comes together! Will Frank free himself? Will Joe get there in time only to get captured himself? Will Laura tie them to their beds and refuse to allow them to leave the house ever again? :D

Great job! I'm enjoying the story!

Looks good! Poor Frank! You write him really, really well! Actually, I personally think you've got the emotion downpat. He's trying not to give away that he's scared but he's scared out of his mind but he's trying to be logical about everything.

That's frank for ya!

glad to see the update. Good going.

oh i ohpe theres more then three chapters, this is relaly good