Whoa, that was amazing! I really loved the whole story - so well-plotted, great dialogue, and so much true, raw feeling. I liked the appearance of Shanks, Ben and Mihawk - although they appear so little, I think you captured them well. Thanks for the story.

Wow! I'm speechless. This is definitely the best One Piece fic I have ever read. The characters were spot on and I truly loved it how many of them you included. I especially adored Smoker's part in this. Good work.

(I reviewed this story before so I'm doing it again as anon.) But dang, this is definitely one of my favorite fics EVER. I reread it these past few days, taking my time with each chapter. Your writing style, the pacing, the characterization of such a wide cast of characters, the plot, everything-- it's so masterful! The first time I read it, I couldn't stop thinking about it for days. And even now, the emotional parts of the story are still so powerful!
Please keep writing more fics like this! Thanks for writing and sharing with us!!

Okay, I'm probably not the first to say this but, THAT WAS AMAZING.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS FIC!

I had to stay up until 4 AM to finish reading it, I couldn't sleep without knowing if Luffy would ever see Zoro again. You portrayed them so well, they were so incredibly in character and I couldn't help but hope that this is what the future holds for them, it would be such a great addition to the epic tales of the Strawhat Pirates.

This is by far my favorite One Piece fanfic so far and I can't thank you enough for writing it! I would've been happy for a bit more zolu-ness [heh heh, i just love seeing them together, they make such an adorable pair! And you did such an excellent job with their One Piece rings, that brought tears to my eyes!] but I wouldn't ask you to change anything, this fic is almost absolutely perfect!

So I might be repeating myself for the 43958430968th time now, but once again, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS FIC, I LOVED IT. PLEASE KEEP WRITING, I LOOK FORWARD TO READING!

This was pretty cool. I was a bit surprised by the beating Zoro recieved when he returned, since he still wasn't healthy. I liked how you handled all the characterization.

Could you please reply to this review with the answers to the following?

Did Zoro master the breath of everything?
Did Kidd get a dream?
Did everyone copmplete their dreams?
How did everyone react to Zoro's new scars?
What happened to Zoro's bounty, did it double like everyone elses or triple for making a fool out of the government by proving them wrong?
What were the strawhat's bounties anyway?
What happened to smoker?

PLEASE ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS!

Holy **...I just found this fanfic and there are so many chapters and every of them has some amazing parts *__* you're so good writer<33 thanks for writing this!!

beautiful story! loved it :) thanks for posting ^^

ok this is the best story i have ever read in my life! My ice skating coach agrees that this story has improved my skills. I just finnished this for the first time, and i can gaurentee all of my friends from school will be reading this story shortly. thank you for this awsome story!

-zorofans4eva19

THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! one question though.Why does Franky need cola? just askin.

OmG AWSOME MY ABSOULATE FAV STORY EVA!

This was really epic, I had to cry during each chapter again. Totally awesome!

NO~~ It's over... *sobs & runs off for tissues*

Anyway, this fic is EPIC WIN. I'm sorry, but there's just no criticism from me, what I said earlier should sum up everything I feel for this fic...

Pls do keep up the awesomely beautiful writing~! And if you have a sequel... ;)

P/S: Honestly, Usopp's words to Zoro, and the rings at the end are my absolute favourites in this entire story. Oh, and the Shanks & Luffy interaction...

Wow. So intense! You seriously made my heart ache... I even cried at the end. :S Off to read chapter two now. ^^

Geez... i think i had tears flowing for about 3/4 of this...

but it was so good!

ah angst, how we love thee...