Aww still sad look forward to the ending

More to the point, what happened to Sarah ? Did she escape in the confusion and the smoke or was she taken under the cover of the fireworks ? Questions, questions, questions...

I very much enjoyed hearing HIS side of the story.

Thank you for sharing.

What you have written is enjoyable. So will you write more please.
It is Jareth alright. When Sarah turned him down. Maybe he was not allowed to be the goblin King anymore. And he had to start fresh with memory of who he was before.

seriously - is he or isn't he??!! ah, i had always hoped you would continue this story line. wonderful addition! i hope to see more on this some time in the future - i think it has a lot of potential and truly, i just really really want it to be jareth!