I almost fell out of my chair laughing after reading this. Unlike you, I treat Kaorin very well in my stories (well, except for her getting knocked unconscious in my current one). I just can't bring myself to abuse her. Great story.

You know, when ever I read this, it always makes me laugh. Seriously, it just never gets old. No offence meant, of course. ;) But I really think Kaori should write more fanfics. She's too funny.

- Jani

Kaorin is evil.. o_o

xD Okay, you might not have deserved ALL of that but you did deserve some! -gives Koarin thumbs up- ROCK ON! ;D

Damn vato, she tore you up. Not too smart, if she was paying you back for the stuff you did in humor she must of failed to think what you do for revenge.

Wow, you sure showed AR, huh Kaorin? Awesome oneshot. It seems pretty cool that you let Kaorin take over your writing, not to mention it was very original; even if Kaorin's story wasn't XD

JBK2K1: Ouch. Getting owned by Kaorin.

Joe: Yeah, well, at least now someone else knows my pain of having to ride in the Yukari-mobile.

JBK2K1: Dude, just grab Yukari's shoulder, and squeeze when she's driving to fast.

Joe: How are you supposed to grab her shoulder when your being pushed against the seat by the sheer speed you're going?

JBK2K1: (A moment of silence) She drives that fast, huh?

Joe: You have no idea.

Awesome fic! This oneshot worked out very well.

Alas, Kaorin! You may have given hell to one nemesis, but I, still exist! Beware poor girl, the future holds much terror for thee. Please, Kaorin-chan, bear my children!

Kaorin: You certainly are odd.

Jay: Look, you bother AR, that means it's payback time for Kaori-chan!

Kaorin: Oh, and like I don't get harassed enough?

Jay: Believe me, I can do far worse than I have before

(this was ungodly funny. Excellent and original concept)

If there's one thing that bothers me, it's when authors lose control of their own stories to a fictional character (no offense, Kaorin). Definitely one of the crazier stories I've ever read, and I can assure you I will never let any fictional characters hijack MY stories.

This was very funny, enjoyed it a lot. Creative =D. Nice to see something light hearted on here, though I feel sorry for Mr. Anime Rebirth. Yukari-mobile rocks!

Yours faithfully, Love Hina Addict.