This is very poetic and I loved how you took the two step theme throughout the story. It was nicely done and although angsty, it was a great piece. Maybe a little grammar tweaks here and there need to be done but that's okay. Thumbs up. :D

That was so sad! T.T

Gorgeous

Lolz Horky, I remember the last review I sent you aked why you only killed Lockhart, I think I asked to soon! :S ¬.¬
Bittersweet, thanks for cheering up my day (jokes :P) Great short fic!
:)
.::Tibbs::.

This is an amazingly emotional and heartfelt piece. Going into my favourites for that. (There was a bit of tense problem in 1 or 2 areas... but apart from that, you handled the usage of the present tense REALLY well.)

It's ok, sometimes I want to kill Cloud too. He can be such a dummy. Anyway, this was really good. I like it. It made me sniffle a bit though, at the end.

And yes, that was the most random secret ending ever. I mean seriously, Square, did you have to go and give us a billion more questions to ask just cause you answered a few!? -shakes fist-

omg u made me cry omg this is o frekin sad

aww!! this is so sad! but its really good at the same time, it made me cry. Great Job

Great story. I uh... Yeah the ending really had an effect on me, the fact that Tifa's life was so much more important to Cloud, and all the realizations that came to Cloud. His life flashing before his life, or rather his thoughts and emotions.

Anyways great job, sad though >_>

This story jsut made me think - the two steps thing is so true! Well realised and beautifully written.

that was interesting :)

That was such a nice story.Each and every single word touched my heart.Keep up the awesome work!

This was such a sad story. But a really good story! Awesome job and I like the thoughts in this story about, "Two Steps". It's something nice to think about. Anyways, great job!