Well, at least they tried to break it off with their current boyfriend/girlfriend before getting back together. Besides they weren't married to other people.

that was good. i just hate rukren and ichihime fics.

Oh how sad, even though I love IchiRuki! You did a great job of keeping the tone of the story tense. But I think you could have made it a little longer, because it's a lot of backstory, action, and feelings for just a one-shot. Good job with the emotions and conflict.

Umm... I want to comment, but I don't know what to say 8D

I liked that. A lot. Strong, compact story.

It's good but you got some of their hair/eye colors incorrect.
Ichigo
Hair- Orange
Eyes- BROWN (you said they were hazel)
Hair- CHESTNUT BROWN (you said she was a blonde)
Eyes- BROWN (officially) For some reason, they changed her eye color to gray in the anime.