wow...this really hit the nail on the head...

D a a a m n.

You caught Road's personality /perfectly/. This was so much fun to read, and I could totally see this as a back story for DGM.

The "sickly pink dough" part made me smile for some reason :D

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this was... awesome! you kept Road in perfect character it would be so cool if you wrote a sequel to this to bad it was a one shot.

but it was an awesome one shot.

Dude the A/N was right on the spot right on the spot. she really freaks me out though. *shiver*

Aw, I don't know what to say (I'm a horrible reviewer) but that was really very well-written, and I think you got Rhode's voice down perfect. Write more!

You did an extremly good job! I have tried to write stories about rhode but I can't get her right :( her character is really complex. I really like it!

Oh...wow. *is speechless* Beautiful! It sounds so much like her! Can you write more like these, because this is really good!