Cute. I like it a lot. I've always sorta wanted the anime to explain exactly /why/ generating- or whatever- is killing Gawl, but since it doesn't... (shrug) Thanks a lot for writing. Well concieved and execute with skill and aplomb!

-Cat

Great story. Well developed, no out-of-character stuff. I didn't like the shounen ai, though... I can't see Ryo with anyone but Koji. :) Other than that, it was very well done. As for the increase of GG fanfiction, i haven't seen the last two dvds, so I'm hesitant to write any.

Such a wonderful story for such a wonderful series..as short as it was.._ Kudos!

Kit

AW! *Sobs* I really loved that! _ Please do another one like that I really loved the way you portrayed Ryu's emotions eating away at him slowly for one big explosion at the end. Gawl's little comfort speech was really touching too, makes you feel all warm and snuggly _

:) S-weet. And you're right: Generator Gawl needs more than a coupla more fics. I guess I better start on it. Anyway, until then: keep writing, you. Meh. :)

that was so wierd, but cool. I like it.

nice fic _ I like how you treated it and I might be mistaken bu t you didn't intend for the shonen ai hints to be there ne? _ Or if you did itwas very subtle. Just the way I like it.

No! Not Ryo! Oh, okay he's fine. I loved it! That sounds like Ryo all right...Are you gonna write another one? (sparkly chibi eyes)

I enjoyed the story. Please write more.

what a good story! you have to srite another story..doesn't have to be a sequel, this story holds up well on its own. and about the more generator gawl stories, i know what you mean! i would, but i can't write well...i can draw, but that's different, this *is* fanfiction.net! continue writing!

Yay! Finally more fanfiction! *showers the author with confetti and Gawl plushies* I love how you portray Ryo (he's so cyuuutteee!). Even if you didn't intend it to be so, this was a shounen-ai/yaoi fans dream: plenty of subtext to read...plenty of other shtuff to misinterpret on purpose :P As for fanfic feedback, the only thing I can think of is that you make the generator battles a little longer, with a bit more description. Otherwise, keep up za good work . *glompz the Author and runs off, waving yaoi and Gawl x Ryo flags*

*bounces happily* Wow, that was good! Angst, character development- all the stuff I love! And about my favorite Generator Gawl character, too. :) Please, keep writing! I can't wait to see more of your stuff...

Very skillfully written. In my view, almost poetic. There are very few tallented fan fiction writers that can affect me when i read their stories, and you just became one of them. _ congradulations _

Maybe I'll write a Gawl fan fic and post it here for you to read. _;

Great story very well writen I loved I hope to see more Generator gawl fanfic soon.

I really felt it protrayed Ryo's feelings and emotions. Beautifuly written