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TheDarkSpirit 11/30/08 . chapter 3
Hey remember me _

I'm sort of back now into Gundam Seed fics.

And I loved this chapter, like I always do. It's kindled version of the bittersweet shadow we chose to hide in when people try to interfere in your life. But when a helping hand is kindly offer to the person in the shadow (and not being grabbed and forced into the clearing). It's what I loved about this chapter. Wasn't so explicit either, but there's no negative impact on me XD. Your writing is still superb...

But I sort of found an error: As he (secretly) watched "she" bent to pick up her locker key and he had to bite his lip to suppress a groan.

Isn't that suppose to be a "her?"
irishdragon 11/12/08 . chapter 3
It was sweet of Neo to want to help her relax after so much work and stress. The bath was a great idea, and it was so cute how she splashed him. They've both been lonely, but now they don't have to be anymore. D

Awesome work and hope to see more soon.
skywolf666 11/12/08 . chapter 3
I was looking for ze Kira but saw him I did not, lol. (yay Yoda) But smuts made up for that anyway, lol. (pounces on) Yay smuts! I really agree with your idea that they were so close in GSD, it makes a lot of sense. They were pretty much always together anyway, and he must have felt something if he wanted to jump in front of the ship again. (smile) They're so cute, lol. Smuts. Smuts, smuts, smuts. Awesome update sis, can't wait to see what's next!

Sky
MetalChickCrisis2040 1/17/08 . chapter 2
I loved it! Will there be more? Hope so, and if so, lol, cant wait! Great so far. 10/10!
mehj 1/16/08 . chapter 1
I think it's lemon. It's just not written in the typical, common and direct way. More like, artistically.

It's nice and beautiful. :) felt the romance (unlike others)
irishdragon 1/16/08 . chapter 2
Thanks sis. *hugs* D It helped cheer me up a lot. Loved how persistent Mwu is. lol Though I don't think she'll be complaining one bit. ;p

This was epic win, and hope to see more from you soon. XD
skywolf666 1/16/08 . chapter 2
Mwahaha (tackles) Heh, gotcha, this is payback for yesterday XD Hee, almost smuts was as good as the shower smuts, XD Well, almost as good but yay! Sorry the review can't be longer (I'd do a lot of squealing and racing around so insert that here) but I gotta get to school (yay school) and YAY SMUTS! XD

Sky
Mandylion 1/2/08 . chapter 1
*sighs contently*

Beautiful. Very romantic... Just what I needed. :)
TheDarkSpirit 9/22/07 . chapter 1
Very much not a lemon *wink* more of embracing your partner a step further. Wow! I can't even write something like this without exposing a certain "area" Or even the *censored" scenes. Like yours... is like wow... first one that very much not really sex, yet it is still matured. Very nice indeed. Sweet and tender, kindled to the heart. I take my hat off to you.
Kylie 9/16/07 . chapter 1
(squeals and tackles) Oh wow, lol! That was awesome! X3 Heehee, that was an awesome smut, Loved how it started with a massage too, Mu's a naughty boy. Teehee. Can't wait to see what you come up with next Seigi-san!
irishdragon 9/15/07 . chapter 1
Eh? What do you mean 'better writers'? This couldn't have been any better. Seriously. It was awesome. Much better than anything I've written, that's for sure.

Absolutely amazing. *is in awe* D
lithiumxflower 9/15/07 . chapter 1
Seigi! I loved it. I havn't been on here in ages! It feels good to be back. I missed you guys. You and your love for Mu and Murrue hasn't changed at all I see. That's good. XD
skywolf666 9/15/07 . chapter 1
(squeals loudly and tackles) Heeheehee! Smuts! X3 Lmao, this was excellent!
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