very nice!i wish it wasnt a one-shot i would like to see how you would make naruto destroy the couresd village...

I am so glad you made this!! a similar plot bunny has been in my head for a year but i didnt feel like writing it...
I really see this as more of a probability that the canon universe... i wonder, seriously, HOW has Naruto not cracked in canon yet? SERIOUSLY!

Bubble-chan: I loved it! I also love the song too!
Itachi: Koi...Its a bit disturbing...
Bubble-chan: Nonsense! Its not! Right NN-chan!
NN-chan: -tears gaze away from Itachi's a.ss- Its not. -turns gaze to sai's bottom-
Sai: Che, I feel an unfamiliar gaze on my lower back.

That's...kinda scary. Excellent but scary none the less because I can see Naruto being pushed to just such a breaking point and not caring that his (her in the fic) revenge will harm the few that he/she cares about as well. You have a talent for making a character's feelings real and palpable.

good but disturbing... but good none the less. I liked it!