I hope you didn't quit because i was looking forward to reading a decent fic for once. And so far the ones i read (your fics i mean) have been more than decent. So please come back to us pwease. also i'm a bit confuse. is this narusasu romance (yaoi) or narusasu friendship (not yaoi).

Hey, I don't know when was the last time you even thought of naruto or logged in, but this is interesting so could you PLEASE continue?

I just re-read your Renewal fic and it made me want to read lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots and lots more Naruto-Sasuke brotherhood stuff now - especially your stuff...but sadly, this fic seems not to have been updated in ages. Here's hoping you're still working on it! Please?

Anyway, this is shaping up to be another good (is there any other kind?) fic from you. Lol, I was totally surprised when it turned out it was just a training exercise; I just kind of stopped and went, "What?" stupidly at the computer.

I was thinking that Sasuke is acting more jerk-ish than before, actually, as you mentioned, but it is kind of in his character, so I can accept that pretty easily. Obviously not much opportunity to show off the Naruto-Sasuke bond yet, but hopefully that's still to come.

I'm not sure if you'll be updating this (will you? will you? c'mon), but I want to leave this review anyhow, 'cause I love all your Naruto-Sasuke works.

Yes! Sequel-ness! XD It's sad, because now there needs to be more conflict, but great, because now there'll be more story. (^_^) I can't wait for more!

I was thinking that it was training ^^ The way Naruto reacted when Sasuke told him that it's not a *game*, and they were too relaxed for it to be a real fight.

So. Sasuke is still staying in Naruto's flat, Team 7 is basically no more, except when Kakashi wants to, and Sasuke is still an unsensitive jerk, am I right? ^^ I'm very much looking forward to reading the next chapter, whether I'm right or not, so please update soon?

Aimael

kep going! :)

Update? Please? Ever?

I love this, and its prequel XD Keep it up, please! It's great~~!

Hi!! Um, I was really enjoying reading the story, but it seems to have been discontinued :( Why not revive it? Its got a very promising start... :)

Hey, I was so looking forward to Kakashi ripping into them *pouts*
Hey, you know, my birthday is coming up (september 14th) and it'd be really cool to get an update then! Or just sometime this month even. I'm not picky :P

^.^ Cool!

Update please? :)

just by reading the prologue i can tell its gonna b awsome. i just hope u dont discontinue it. i realy like it ^_^ update soon!

I have also noticed that you haven't updated in a while. I'm not purposely trying to sound disrespectful or rude, but you haven't died right? In any case your writing style is amazing! I think that if any other person besides Masashi Kishimoto should own own Naruto, it would be you.

I like your stuff a lot. Lack of romance is, actually, a really nice break--the characters don't have to strain to stay in character. Also, your music taste is awesome, and radiohead are my favorite ever. Yep, I think I'm pretty satisfied with what you've written so far.

Any chance of an update? ('S been a few months, as you may have noticed.) Or has this been pretty much given up?

Hm... no idea whats going to happen here. and as for Sasuke's personality... From how you write him in your other fics bonds wouldn;t be the problem... but being ultra pissed at the damn training exercise would definitely do that.

Well keep up the good work and i guess we'll find out more about Shin later.