This story's prety good. I like the part with Teretis and Seraphine in the net, particularly.

HA HA HA! Seems funny.

P.S. Sorry for the late reveiw.

Hey. Blade100 here, and...I just want to say I'm sorry. Sorry for not updating any stories I have in AdventureQuest. I used to have, arguably, the most popular story here...

Its just...I lost interest, and I got new ideas for other things, and all sorts of stuff. I'm sorry, really, I am. I hope to one day reboot my work, maybe start anew of the stories of Alex Dragonark and Stargazer. I hope, one day I will, for now, I am working on some other stories in Fictionpress. If you have time, I'd be honored if you read them. Besides that, again, I am very sorry for not updating anything here. I do wish I could bring myself to it, but...yeah...Again, sorry. Truly, deeply, sorry.

Another interesting chapter. I was little confused at first 'cause at the end of last chapter I thought they were going to the rip in the sky and now Devi's in a nightclub full of vampires. Did I miss something?

Interesting chapter.

I'm sorry but I can check out the continuation of "The Fourth Reset" 'cus I can't find it.

A pretty good story, I'm currently reading to Chapter 7. Will read the other chapters tomorrow, I promise.

Everything sounds interesting, but, when are you going to post it (your OM sequel )?

I like what you've done to this chapter. I also like what you've written for "The Fourth Reset", however, you quoted "Macbeth" wrong. You should have put, "Life is but a walking shadow, a poor player who struts and frets his hour about the stage and then is heard no more." If that wasn't what you were quoting, I apologize.

Cool chap'. Can't wait to see the rest.

That was evil, doing a "Birds" spoof (my least favorite Hitchcock move) and ending it like that. Besides, wasn't Trinenna about to tell her story? Ah, well, keep up the good work.

This is good. Where did Selpuchure come from, though?

Thanks, that would be nice.

O.K. that was funny but what happens next in the plot? I need to know what happened after the "Avatar of Hope" thing and whether Serpentine finds out she's related to a Paladin who's helping vampires and dracopires.

Whoa! Suspenseful ending! Update before the supense kills me!

Wow! Very interesting. (Run, Devi, run! Before Serpentine finds you!)