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wendyghost 3/19/05 . chapter 1
lol, i hope u find the one you like!1
The Rose Garden 8/17/03 . chapter 1
There was much thought and food for thought in this. Sometimes this is good. She is one of my favorite anime characters and you write such good stories about her. Bravo. I want more.
Zilindico 7/30/02 . chapter 1
Good story. I especially liked the entire dress idea, her swishing of the dress and the mimicing mirror images. This story actually helped to inspire my own android story. Nice work, especially with imagry. _
OtakuInTraining too lazy to sign in 3/21/02 . chapter 1
This review is WAY overdue. I should hae reviewed this the first time I read it, but something tells me I didn't read it thoroughly enough that time, because I've never before watched her hands caress Roger's face through the reflection of the floor...The one point that sticks out at me, farther than all the rest, is that she'll never touch his face, really. And even if she were to, like in your Gloves trilogy, it's not for REAL. Now, this sounds absurd, when one considers that even if she were to stroke his face for real, in the "official" show, it's still NOT real as in flesh-and blood/metal-and-ersatz-heart REAL. But more than anything else, at this moment I pity Dorothy because she can only read about her hands carerssing Roger's face; she reads, imagines, touching him, but never will. It makes me strangely disconsolate.
raven 3/3/02 . chapter 1
i think it's sweet that you based it off a personal experience and that the story turned out so well. i enjoyed reading it. thankx for writing.
raven 3/3/02 . chapter 1
i think it's sweet that you based it off a personal experience and that the story turned out so well. i enjoyed reading it. thankx for writing.
raven 3/3/02 . chapter 1
i think it's sweet that you based it off a personal experience and that the story turned out so well. i enjoyed reading it. thankx for writing.
raven 3/3/02 . chapter 1
i think it's sweet that you baised it off a personal experience and that the story turned out so well. i enjoyed reading it. thankx for writing.
Sparkles1 12/8/01 . chapter 1
I liked it, I just finished watching the Matrix so my brain is all confused but it seemed really nice. Hope more come along like it. *Sparkles -*
Shadow Ninja 12/2/01 . chapter 1
Try not to let things get to you. You seem to be a deep thinker. (chuckle) You sort of remind me of me. You seem to think things as more then they appear.
Silens Unus 11/11/01 . chapter 1
I want more, give me more.
Lady Razorsharp 10/1/01 . chapter 1
Wow, Serena! This was breathtaking...very well done. For some odd reason I can hear the bluesy soundtrack wailing behind this...overlaid with the sound of the rain...
Kidd 9/30/01 . chapter 1
You so funny, Serena. But another good fanfic.
End Noesis 9/18/01 . chapter 1
Hey I thought I reviewed this already! I liked the part in which they seem to touch, I could have never thought of that. About the wedding dress, I guess you'll have to have yours custom made for your own tastes ;). I never liked mirrors, there's always something missing in them.
FaerieRavyne 9/15/01 . chapter 1
This was intense. The feelings that had to be found within the story and the lines. I absolutely adored it. What you mentioned at the end was also the truth, and one should never be sorry when the truth is spoken.
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