eh Mello just reminds me of Light is what i thought you meant but thats really cute

video games are an escape from reality so much that you forget how to handle it like youre putting your life on hold and forgeting everything around you interesting hm good fic

its ironic to think that Light hates the endless cycle that is his life because everything is so easily obtainable and yet L wants some pattern to his days so at least he knows what will happen next so everything will turn out perfect though in the end ive always thought he has always hated him good story

i love how you wrote that all good things must end in the worst and kira was no different-at the end of the rainbow theres a ditch and its calling humanity to hell-because of mans endless search for greed power and lust it never has any happy endings ill fav definatly

You are such an amazing writer. Some of your chapters made me cry, because they were so depressing. I love your stories!

Touching.. so very, truly touching all of these stories are. Even Misa. Do you know how few authors portray Misa as beautifully as you do here? You have this habit of making me tear up at your stories, Mikanis, and I love you for it.

This is very VERY good! I had trouble figuring out whether it was L speaking of Light, but I think I came to the conclusion it was L. Very nice. It reminds me of the first line of Breaking Benjamin's song "Breath". "I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less I like." I love it!

Wow. These are really deep. You really make the characters seem real. I love it! ^_^

Wow, that was... that was really deep man. I mean it. Its beautiful. Seriously, I actually envisioned the entire thing. I loved how you wrote Light calling Misa "My Martyr". It fits her so perfectly. Remarkable job. And the ending gave me goosebumps. It was so... damn!

PS: I was listening to Evanescence's song, Tourniquet, while reading this and I say the song goes well with your story. Sorry, I like speaking my mind.

...:stunned into silence: (again)
...wow...I really like how the succesors finally grow up to fill L's gaps. I think you made it too unclear wether it was Matt speaking or Near. Otherwise, it was great!

:stunned speechless:
No...way...
LUV it! I guess the only difference is that Death is actually stable, while justice is not. Justice and death may be related, but only in Light's mind. To have justice built into your system like L has...
I really like chapters like this that are really philosiphical.

OMG! My fave chapter by far!! It wraps up the whole concept of religion and stuff! I can certainly see L thinking about all of this. Indeed, how can you place your faith in something that is not solid?
LUV THIS CHAP!

So CUTE! :D
I loved the whole aspect of growing up in this chappie, how kids make rash choices about the outside world.
I can't really imagine Mello like this though.
Aww! MelloxNear bonding!

I've never thought of Mello and Matt that way! I mean, I've thought of them in their fluffy moments, but I can SO imagine Mello getting all parental like that. Great job!

You're amazing. You've portrayed everyone so accurately, like you know everyone so innately. I must confess, I didn't understand who was in a couple of chapters, but I got most of them and it's amazing.

I will be waiting here until the next chapter.
-Storms