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| Daystar Clarion 2008-07-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseI don't like to critique other people's work, because I always feel like a posing jerk when I do, but once in a while, I come across a piece of work that I must give my opinion on. Here it comes... Um, you have a brilliant idea here, I mean so good, that it pains me that I wish you had written it differently. I found that I was confused about your flashbacks, and also the dialogue. I just feel that if you'd written this differently, it would be super awesome! It has so much potential! (hinthint) |
| Withering Soul 2008-07-07 ch 2,  | abuse..OOh, this is really interesting. Hope to see you update it again. You write crazed!Naruto pretty damn good... And just the whole style you have going adds to the mood (like how it's kind of disjointed? With the skipping around in time) It just really really helps with the feel of it. Thanks for sharing. |
| Exalted 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuselol, sometimes the insane Naruto is the best Naruto :P. I do hope you continue this story as I am looking forward to the next update :D |
| Kyuubi-ismy-homie 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abusethis is a good story but the skips are a little confusing ... i can't wait to see where this goes |
| TheKazz 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so incredibly deep, I absolutely LOVED it. It's a side of Naruto that doesn't get shown very often, but you know it's still there somewhat. I hope the manga will go deeper into his character and into his past someday. |
| ChocohalicsAnonymus 2007-12-14 ch 2, | abusepoor naruchan -hugs- |
| Herooftimes 2007-11-14 ch 2, | abuseanother good chapter. i hope the next one comes out sometime soon. so angsty... |
| Herooftimes 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abusea really nice first chapter. ihope this story gets really long. so what happened to cause all this? |
| mani-g 2007-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abusewhatever happened to the two stories related to this one? "Confessions", and.. there was another one wasn't there? |
| mani-g 2007-09-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethis.. this.. Thing.. is mesmerizing! if you can call it a story, it's all jumbled up but in a good way.. can't take my eyes away ! It's in the details.. things are disconnected but so.. Real.. so Raw and Unforgiving in the misery that naruto is put through.. If this story progresses in the same manner it's sure to be gripping.. gut wrenching but hypnotizing.. for now it's too early to see what direction it's taking, but i can't wait to see what that will be.. please continue! |
| leelai 2007-09-19 ch 2, | abuseWho is it that keeps destroying his apartment now? Or is it perhaps the nine-tail? I see more past rememberances. It's getting more interesting. Update soon! ^^ |
| KuroAi15 2007-09-18 ch 2, | abuse... i have bad reading comprehension... what happened here? |
| KuroAi15 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abusethis... is great! wow! is ther gonna be a next chapter? |
| leelai 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI await your next update. It's interesting and I'm curious as to what you plan for Naruto and his past that is mentioned as if he doesn't remember it but recalls randon peices at different intervals of time. |