Very interesting. I wonder what happened when Harry was hit by that AK. I understand the red was probably the Philosopher's Stone, but what's with the silver flames? I'd have guessed it was his mother's protection, but I still don't get why are Harry's hands turning black.

This is a really good story. I hope that it's not permanently abandoned.

Wow. Even your Lockhart is competent, in his own way.

Your Dumbledore is the best Dumbledore! Hell, I even like Snape so far.

Most fics I've read which compare the Wizarding and Muggle worlds claim that the latter is superior. I really like how your fic suggests otherwise. You've shown nicely how everything Muggles can do, Wizards can do better.

This is one of, if not the best fics I have ever read.
It's too bad you never finished.
Very original. And not cliche at all.
Why did you stop?

I've just reread this and all I can say is:

This is an absolutely amazing story, probably the best fan fiction I've ever read. It is quire sad that you've abounded this, and I can only hope that someday you chose to come back to it.

Oh, and this story should have 3000 some odd reviews instead of 300.

Well done, if incomplete and after 4 years likely to stay that way. In particular i like your handling of characterization. This may be the most believable Dumbledore I've ever seen; neither too nice for his own good or second dark lord, he comes across as a genuine leader. I'd like to see the rest of this, but I'd also like to read something you finished. Got anything elsewhere?

Normally it's at about this point when I have to stop with these kind of fics: I can't stand just sitting here reading about everything falling to shit. But this is...brilliantly done. Simply brilliant. I know that it's been nearly four years since this had been updated, and there's every chance that this will become Yet Another Bloody Amazing But Highly Unlikely To Ever be Finished Story, but I still just had to say...wow. You've got some serious talent, here.

LunaK

You could have made this story more interesting by letting Harry have a harem.

Brilliant story! But I just have to know have you abandoned it!

Ok, this is an amazing story. Not just for the writing (which is amazing in itself) but for all the theory you created. How did you come up with all that?

After reading Dumbledore's lessons or Harry and Hermione study sessions, I was amazed at how good they were, it sounded real.

This is a superb story. If this is one of your firsr attempts at writing, then you should be proud.

Quoting Ollivander, I can say that "we can expect great things from you", and clearly this is one of them.

Ps: i dont know exactly when did you write this story (im out of internet and im reading from my cellphone, and the mobile site still has some flawns), so I just found it :)

A lot of fun, some inconsistencies due to the incomplete state of the update (a big one is the many references to the Troll incident which now never happened).

My attention is pretty caught up by the fact that the telling of this story is a diversion for H&H...

This Story has brought into wonderful prose many of the vague ideas I wish I'd had. I love it. By midway through the second chapter I already knew this would be one of my favorite stories and it's only gotten better.

This is great! Any chance of an update?