uhm! i LOve it
this is great
haha

So cute!

I like them together also. this was nice. just check your grammer and spelling. you did a great job!

“Sawada hit his stomach! Break his damn arms!”
-> haha. funny! XD

funny story. and cute. ^^

Hey I like your story please continue this story because I would like to read mor of it

That was really funny! You should add more, like what she does when she sees Shin again. That would be Hilarious!

this is nice...simple. yet nice. it's true that there isn't anything like this in here. Great job :)

make more. do more.
kudos

Continue. Don't stop.

wow!! i loved it!! sugee..^_^

cho chwet ^_^

kawaii ne?
i love it!

love it i was right u r good!!