it was beautiful however im not sure if i couldd take a spanking from my father in law .

I enjoyed this. Thanks for letting Veronica and Logan reunite - guess I'm a sucker for romance. I will look forward to the next one!

Before you write for a fandom, please make sure you understand the fandom you’re writing about. What may work for the other fandom’s you may be writing for (I wouldn’t know, since I now fear reading anything by you) does not mean it will work for all your fandoms. If you actually took the time and watched VM, you would know that the entire ‘spanking’ was so out of character and unrealistic for this show. For one, Keith will never spank Veronica the way he did. Veronica would not have let him do it. And do you really think Logan would volunteer to get spanked, himself? After everything he went through growing up with Aaron? For real, did you even watch the show at all or better yet, did you understand it? You’ve got to remember, you’re just borrowing these characters when you write for a fandom, the least you can do is be cognizant of what you write when it’s not your original work.

I would just like to point out that the authors original warning only said "there would be spanking." Then, after the author received several "creeped" out emails, she change the warning to "disciplinary spanking warning." So for the people who where reading the story from the start, it was pretty shocking to read the disturbing turn of events... For those who think that her warning was "a-ok"

Me being sorry doesn't mean that I pity you. I never pity anyone because I believe is up to you how you make your life and how you deal with your past.
I get how you concive spanking and that you believe it could be use to help someone and i know there's people that believe it too, but that doesn't make it right for me. I still belive that the humillation isn't worth it and it shouldn't be done.
There are better ways of teaching someone something and more efective. I never had to be spanked to learn something and I never had to spank anyone to get me, it is so wrong that in civiliced countries (like mine) you could go to jail because abussing kids or adults is SO sick.

I'm close to 30 myself.
I'm sorry to hear that about your childhood...
I imagine that writing most be helpful. For me is a very good way of expresing though I can't do it as much as I would like.
For my life experience and of those around me I don't believe that anything good can ever come out of hitting someone that's why I felt the need to rewiew your stories.
All of this is just my opinions and I don't believe that any of the two has the whole truth, just opinions..
I really hope that you have go on with your life despise what happened to you, and that this fanfics are just that, fictional and not something you believe normal is this life.

Yeah you are right I didn't read your warning so I just keep reading trying to make a sense out of it..
I just want to tell you that I don't think I'm in any way better than you (I'm not really a big fan of myself) and I didn't intend on insult you or your writing..
I really tought maybe you could use some help because writing about certain stuff is just not right.
You don't need to go around justifying yourself or atacking anyone. If you decided to read my stories and rewiew them it would be great because it would probably be constructive for me.
And again, I didn't intend on insulting you, just trying to help...

I just realize that every story you write has spanking..
I hope that you can get help because you should know that this isn't normal or right.
I'm not trying to insult you with this, only letting you know that you should get help and hope you get it

God this is really disturbing =S
I really hope you don't take this as something natural and you just tought it was a good idea to write about it (even that is a little weird)

Woah, I feel violated. Holy SHIT. Have you ever watched the show, honey?

And LMAO at 'One who knows her work well'. Oh, sweetheart, you don't have to make up names, just say it's you then people might actually respect you.

This is the worst piece of fanfiction I have ever read and I hope you never get to write to this show again. Maybe you could try Original Writing, that way you won't completely FUCK UP characterizations.

Peace, honey!

I will repeat for the very last time that I am not the author.

Whether you believe me or not is pointless and I'm not worrying myself into a fit over whether you do or do not, but I'll put it out there anyway.

I invite Jenna to delete my reviews in fact if I've done her more harm than good by speaking up to those who clearly are more willing to disrespect a good writer than admit to any wrong doing, heaven forbid.

And if you can not tell that her style of writing is not the same as mine, then you really are just paying attention to what you want and what is not, in fact, actual fact.

Oh, and one more thing, I have no contact because I am not an author here, and I do not go about posting any email address of mine online in such an insecure area.

But honestly? It is situations like this that are the reason I normally leave this very site be, because I have yet to see the point of putting one's self in the mist of little teenagers, mostly, who are awfully quick with their keyboards and little snippy attitudes and who have yet to gain true world experience and not know things merely from books or fiction or what they've been told but have actually lived long enough to see the truth for themselves.

I'm over 60, and I've dealt with more than my share of such individuals over the years, so why inflict more upon myself I say.

And with that, believe whatever you want to, say whatever you want to, but reporting this story will do no good because she did no wrong, and in fact it's more likely that if I clicked the abuse button on most of the reviews that have been posted, more often than not the authors of those would hear back before she ever would.


And "Anon"? Spanking is not an sexual act. It is normal for a parent to spank their child exactly as she wrote it happening in the story. Spanking has been and can be used for sexual pleasure, but that depends on the people and their intent and as you seem to know it only through fiction, as most do here I'm betting, I understand why'd you say as such.

But if you want to look it up, say in a dictionary of some sort, it means merely to smack one's backside, and its first purpose was sorely for discipline, and there are many, many, many parents who would take you to task for assuming as much about an act that has been used for ages to keep kids in line for the very reason of loving them.

Believe it or not.

And that was the therapist side coming out, but carry on, I know even that bit of fact will merely be overlooked.

i am in agreement w. sodapop and anonymous that one who knows her work well is the author.
i also am i agreement that this story really creeps me out mostly because the author seems to think this is acceptable, normal even. not to mention its OOC
whatever the first few chapters were entertaining its really too bad it turned into, um, whatever this is

Sorry, can't help myself or hold my own anymore.

I think what was so disturbing about this fic is that it was written in such an insidiously sexual way, and yet the author spent so much energy having the characters 'reassure' the readers that it was just a normal concerned parent doing what he thought was right for his daughter and the daughter understanding this and appreciating it and...

It gave off the vibes that this author actually *felt* that this was normal for a father and his adult daughter and that was what was completely off putting.

It's so out of character it's just not right. I have absolutely no problem, quite the opposite actually, with people experimenting with dominance, control, sexually inspired punishment, that sort of thing. I really enjoy a good, quick, hard fic against the wall like that.

But in this case it was a sexual act written as a non-sexual, blatantly paternal act for a child's apparent mental benefit and well being. Which... is so completely wrong.

Not only would Veronica freak out if anything like that were to occur, it never would, because Keith is (seriously) the Best. Dad. Ever. and not at all a creepy, perverted, mouth breather like this fic made him.

i just wanted to say that this story isn't that bad. i think everyone has blown the spanking thing way out of proportion. it was a really good story. the spankings were a little awkward. but its not like they were perverted in any way. keith has always struggled to protect veronica from herself and even though she loves her dad veronica doesn't really listen. and more than that it was a little funny. i mean if you don't take everything so seriously, logan agreed to get spanked. and when they cuddle they are both going to have sore behinds. which come on, is a little funny.

i have a theory...Öne who knows her work well'is the same person who wrote this disgusting story.

No person in their right mind would spank their '19'' year old daughter, then their daughters boyfriend.

I also have another theory "any reviews from people who you cant contact back to is also the author.

COME ON! you cant actualy think that this is a good story, first off you should have wrote in the first chapter that v and l would be spanked by Keith.

sorry...wait thats not true, im not sorry that im reporting this story for affencive material