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| beautyinsleep 2007-09-20 ch 1,  | abuseRandom, but very, very funny. (And your Kakashi can like whatever the heck he wants to.) XDD |
| PirateDena 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseKakashi doesn't like tempura. >_> He likes eggplant miso soup. |
| ceyx0991 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuse*claps a lot* YAY!! it's a very good story! I like it! |
| The-Algebraist 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuselol. PS it was actually quiet a good little story. |
| sillymail 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseRandom, but good. |
| MoonIdiot 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseHe went through all that trouble to find out where the nearest ramen store was? Hilarious! Yes, he is a very simple man with manners ^^ lol... |
| Man I'm like bored and stuf... 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseThat's really funny! I loved his 'manners'! |
| CascadingIris 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseOh.God. I love you, Xinlin! You are such a great writer. This made me laugh so much. Awesome. ♥ |
| RaiMidori 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWondrously written! Spellbinding! You might've overused 'Hatake Kakashi' when all you had to do was put a simple 'he'. It didn't retain that beautiful flow of yours very well, but it wasn't too large of an obstacle. All in all, you have a great sense of metaphors, and I cannot wait for more from you. You are a promising author! |