A great story. Very good.

I like the five part division effect.

Holy freaking cow! This was an amazing story, one of the best I've read lately. I'd love to read any other Rogue story you do. :wink wink, nudge nudge: You write very well, keep up the good work!!

Great!! And a nonshipper to boot -- good on ya!! It's a concise tale and doesn't need another word.