Very deep and moving work. This is coming from a comedian but in all seriousness brava! brava!

why are you bragging about how many people faved you on your profile? lots of people on this site fave lots of authors, but these authors dont go around bragging about it.

as for your work, its better than most, but you could still use some work on punctuation and style.

Phew,that was so sad...and angsty...and beautiful.^^ I liked it.

I liked the dark tone of this fic... But especially how you tried to relate this piece to the DMC novels... I absolutely adore those books, and hope to see more authors in the future write about Gilver and/or Tony.

how can a gunshot echo and be silent at the same time?
the silent wail fo a gunshot echoed? then dismal silence?
its repetitive, but overall, nicely written. Its just that it needs more attention to work in explaining descriptions.

the 2nd sentence seemed to go on too much. but its how you write, so thats ok.

you asked for constructive criticism, so there you go.

Just watch out for repetition and how you should word your description. Because unless a wail is silent, it shouldn't make a noise.

Ah! Once more you nearly made me cry, you really need to stop doing that with your fics! Heck, Dante being suicidal... very sad but also a very good idea XD and I can kinda see why you may have enjoyed writing it... lol