Yeah, I agree with, er... the last reviewer. Alas, the title just seems a bit to bland. It's like cooking vegies without anything but water! Yuck! (Twist face in to disgusting look)

not pleasant eh...? Hm?

Well, not at all pleasant not much flavoring with your title either. Well, unless it's the title of the poem, then, okay, fine by all means leavve it, but or else, there's a problem with it!

No, harm meant... Lol!

Cheers!

I thought it could've been better. The title, for one, is a bit too straightforward. But still it's a good attempt.

The best thing about your poem is the 3 sets of triple full-rhymes in structure. It would probably look better if you broke each of the "Be Strong!" into separate stanzas though.