I really enjoyed the story, and i escpecially liked the ending about Jiraiya and Naruto. Shikamaru and Temari are so cute together, Great job!

"...Ruka swiped him by the color of his shirt, pulling..."

Do you mean "collar"?

Well, I helped. Great story, I love it. I'm almost done reading!

Wow, this was really good! You kind of rushed the plot, a little bit, in some places, and your writing style is good (not perfect or spectacular) but pretty good, it could use some work, but don't we all?

I see talent, and lots of it.

Yeah thats hilarious, no lie. LOVED IT! I REALLY DID!

ah, the secrets are being let out, YES!

oh, jealousy indeed. LOVE IT!

aw, thats really cute, lovely.

i think im going to like this story alot!

“Actually, Temari, you scared the living muffins out of me…”

Ahahahahahhaahahaahaha!

this was a great story! i hope you write a sequal! :D

You had me gripped to the computer screen! I'd love to see a sequal to this! keep up the good work!

awesome! need squel

Holy crap really?

Haileyamandar,

Your ideas are absolutely sweet, and it makes a winning combination with well-crafted plots! Each chapter has its own appeal, and all chapters really demonstrated Shikamaru and Temari's genuine concern for each other, as well as what their teamwork.

The flow of the story is natural and alluring; I'm glad I read this! Thanks for writing this beautiful story!

awesome i love it and i cant wait to read the sequel when you post it! please let me know when you do cuz i'll probely forget to go and look to see if its up or not by the time it is ! '

thanx so much i love this story and it ended well !

*with the whole Naruto drunk thing lol *

Nayami-chan