I was twitching in the beginning from the dislike I felt towards this, but then I realized that it wasn't that bad of a piece. It got pretty interesting from the middle on.

I like the short exchange between Shizuru and Natsuki. It was sweet, even though the situation was definitely not.

Great job!

Writing crazy Shizuru can be fascinating, yes. I think I may have enjoyed it too much. (both the writing and the reading of this) My reviewing skills fail me tonight, but I did like this. It was less dark, more...hopeful? Ish. Either-or, 'twas good.

Naolin

i like how you write. to bad it's only a one shot.

Oh, that was really cute...with a hint of sadness...but that wasn't that kind when you throw fists in the front of computer yelling "Goddamn angst !" or sit like a doll with no idea what to do now. I do like that piece much ;)

And yeah, I am fan of mumbling Shizuru too :D Even now she's so admirable :D

I feel sorry for both of them. It was sweet though :)

omega-sama...wow...I find ur story strikingly similar to DemonicTwister's "Silence of the Himes" ... and it's really good, but i guess u already knew ... *hit the floor in a poor attempt to bow in front of such a writer*

If Natsuki thinks that's better as she can be near Shizuru, then, i'd rather see the chestnut haired girl dead...It should be less painful...But that's just me and my awful ideas...

Arigatou...

Ara, that was one crazy piece to read and you did a great job interpeting between the "crazy and normal people". LOL

At least Shiznat get to be together in a way. Nicely done!

angsty/crazy shizuru ftw!

she's always the crazy one, poor shizuru. just because she went on a genocidal/psychotic killing spree once, it doesn't mean... ok. but like caz said, "we like creepy, no?"

Well. This was about as depressing as Sanctuary and the other Fanfic about Shizuru being crazy and locked up. Beautifully written nontheless.

Yay it's finished! It certainly seemed like you had fun writing this. I can tell. ;) Shizuru was great, I really loved her inner dialogue. Wolfy's right, you certainly have a way of putting a humourous slant on something that should be angst ridden. And that's perfect for this kind of fic. It carries the crazy undertones along nicely.

Also, I can't handle angst well so that was a relief. ;) Shizuru sums up my views pretty well too. I guess that makes me crazy too eh? _0 I have to feel sorry for her here though, chained and masked and kept seperated from Natsuki. But it's sweet that Natsuki visits her and watches over her. Natsuki crying though... I just want to step in and smash that glass so they can be together. Gah. *gets distracted by images of Natsuki in a lab coat*

Anyway, it was wonderfully written. I didn't expect anything less though. :P And wasn't it a nice break from your multi-chapter fic? :D

aww *sniffs* it was crazy and cute and cant think of any thing else but i liked it pretty much

Lmao I'm probably really mean in saying this but Shizuru was so funny in the fic. O: Rambling Shizuru ftw! Ahh and it is true. For a crazy person she made quite a lot of sense.

You have a clever way of putting things into a light humorous manner when they could just as easily be heavy ansgt sis! Really. Clever.

And omagosh Natsuki as a doctor...hawt image! And Shizuru's her patient...D: Why did you make this a one-shot? Now you gave me a new fic idea! AGAIN! Thanks a lot! Dx

But seriously. I loved this. Shizuru almost seemed catty. Faving! x3