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xalcen
2009-02-05 . chapter 18
This is how you write a Kim/Tommy fic. Heck, this is how you write any fic and keep the readers interest. This is a very good story that I could not put down(internetwise anyway) until I finished. You kept the readers on edge and you managed to do it while being true to the characters. I also like you didn't make Kat into some horrible person during this. Far too many fics about Kim and Tommy do that. Good job, keep writing things like this. You do good work.
amethystluv
2008-12-01 . chapter 18
Absolutely amazing!! I mean, just incredible! If had a 5 star rating system your story would be one of the few out of thousands that would deserve 6 stars! I started reading your story because I was bored, and just wanted to kill some time. I had no expectations of being absolutely entranced by your writing. Your writing... you made beloved characters even more... I need a good word- human, I guess. You were able to keep them in character while at the same time fleshing them out. You kept to a timeline so that the fanatics (such as myself) wouldn't feel cheated. You not only created a story, but made everything about it your own while staying true to the PR unvierse. I think I'm starting to repeat myself, but like I said 6 stars!! I very rarely find a story that captures my attention so completely, and you seemed to do it flawlessly. While I didn't want it to end, I absolutely loved the ending.
I think I'm starting to sound like a stalker- don't worry, you won't need a restraining order. I just had to let you know that I am a fan of your writing. Thank you for the story.
twilightm00n
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
Good stuff.
o0-Key-0o
2007-12-19 . chapter 18
Okay, it is now 4:36 a.m. EST. I think I started reading your fic at 11. It was SO worth it! You know how to hook your readers; you grabbed me and hauled me right through your Ranger-napping, Goldar-bashing, romance-restoring plot and I enjoyed every single minute.

Have to admit that I cried twice in the Epilogue; which means that you did an exceptionally good job with structuring the emotional level of the story, something that is very rare in any kind of book, much less fanfic these days. Many people like to do Kim/Tommy get-back-togethers, but yours was truly wonderful and unique. Plus, you've also given me some plot-bunnies for a fic that I've been meaning to write for a long time but can't because it's the third part of a trilogy and won't make sense until I /start/ the first story and /finish/ the second. (I know, how does that work, right?)

All the same, this was really fantabulous. And as it is now 4:41 and my parents can probably hear me typing on this keyboard, I shall say good night.

~Key
hewhoreaps
2007-10-29 . chapter 18
Very interesting story. In someways it would have been even more interesting of Zedd and Kim had gotten married but you could always do that via another story.
Craig
2007-05-27 . chapter 18
Um...wow! Seriously, you had so much angst going in here, I thought I was gonna have to read a fluff fic just to get through the rest of the day! Not that I'm complaining. Very dramatic. And a MUCH better take on the effects of Maligore than the movie took. Probably could have used more sap at the end, but that's just my personal preferences talking. I certainly have to applaud this exceptional piece of work.
THE UNKNOWN
2007-04-05 . chapter 1
HEY I MEANT TO ASK THIS LAST NITE, BUT FORGOT:

1. WHAT HAPPENED TO DIVATOX? DID SHE JUST DROP KIM OFF AT THE POWER PLANT AND LEAVE OR DID ZORDON PUT THE DETONATOR ON HER SPACE CRAFT?

2. AND WHAT ABOUT EGEON? WERE ZORDON AND ALPHA ABLE TO FIX HIM UP OR IS HE STILL LOONY?
THE UNKNOWN
2007-04-04 . chapter 18
I GOT A FEW THINGS I WANNA SAY

1. THIS WAS AWESOME, PLEASE DO A SEQUAL

2. I READ THE END OF 'HART OF DARKNESS', AND 'PAWNS' DEFINATLEY KICK ITS **
Shizuka no Taisho
2007-03-14 . chapter 1
I love this story
Andi
2007-01-23 . chapter 18
WOW...I must say...when I stumbled upon this fic, I didn't think it would blow my mind as it did. I also checked out your original version; and yes, this revised multi-chaptered story is an extremely excellent improvement on it. I love the way you expanded the story theme - just the right amount of action, suspense, detail...and the level of emotion you've put into each chapter was worth the time I spent reading it non-stop (and that was way past my bedtime!).
Anyway, many kudos to you - you are a great writer! Looking forward to reading the rest of your work (and any upcoming ones too)!
THE UNKNOWN
2006-12-17 . chapter 17
(blood-curdingly scream)NO! (sobbing hysterically)(now speaking with fake southern accent) OH KIMMIE, WHY'D IT HAVE TO BE HER??!! SHE WAS SO YOUNG...SO SUGARY CUTE...SO FREAKING HOT AND...(back to sobbing hysterically)(now speaking w/ angoized voice) I NEVER GOT TO SEE HER **. (now speaking normally)EEH WELL, AT LEAST ZEDD WAS KILLED AND I NO HOW THIS STORY REALLY ENDS (smile).
THE UNKNOWN
2006-12-17 . chapter 18
DEFINATLEY 1 OF MY TOP FAV. PR FANFICS. I NEW THAT LET-R WAS 2 ** 2 B REAL.
AuereusUna
2006-08-07 . chapter 18
I know its been awhile since you wrote this but I just wanted to let you know that I REALLY enjoyed this story. And ya nearly gave me a heartattack when i thought u killed kim off. LoL. GREAT writing
ASecretSomeone
2005-10-25 . chapter 7
Wow, obvious references to the movie... I didn't even notice the time corresponding with it.
ASecretSomeone
2005-10-25 . chapter 5
Bwaha, I hope you don't mind, but I skipped ahead to the very last bit. I read the first part and it was well written and all, but I hate technical jumble.
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