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xkiisstheraiin
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abusehehehe that was cute! lol i like it :)
Graymoon74
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseSo sweet =)
stareagle
2007-11-20
ch 1,
abuseI just ran across your story and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it- You had a clever insight- the hamster was a great meataphor! Excellent job. thanks for sharing
Wander52
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseCute analogy...
contrarymotion
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseA hamster?! Unique idea, to say the least. I loved the last line.
Nea-9
2007-09-27
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was so sweet and funny and cute. You have an amazing talent, your stories brighten my day. can't wait for the next one!
The Queen of Sin
2007-09-20
ch 1,
abuseSQUE! HAMSTER! I love Hamsters! hehehe I got my first EVER hamster a couple of weeks ago and he's SO cute and his name's Phenophthalien! and I don't know why I'm telling you that... meh!
Great story! It was cool! I liked the hamster bit!
Redneck626
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuse*sighs* I love GSR fluff. Good work!
EvilsaysBob
2007-09-17
ch 1, anon.
abuse“I did that to you! I made you my hamster!”

The first thing I thought when I read that was "Is that a new way of saying 'I made you my b*h' because I'm totally gonna start using that phrase." Then I kept reading and I was wrong, but I still thought was hilarious.
microgirl
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is so Grissom-to have some epiphany at the most random moment. I liked this; the description from Sara's POV was great and Grissom apologizing over the hamster was adorable :)
chibiness87
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abuseFLUFF!

Thank you, i NEEDED that!

Ok, i'll actually review now... I love this analogy. It's such a Grissom thing to do, to see the light in the most crazy ways. And i agree with Sara... i would keep running too if the reward was having him! Lol.

Great work.
chiops
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseA very nice story with a very unique epiphany. Thanks a lot!
Andsowego
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseWhat a perfectly weird story. I LOVED IT.
Peace, Andsowego
StarlaMarie
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseAww I got the connection right after he said he was a horrible person lol! How cute!!
Veronica10
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseITs fluff night tonight and I am so happy. This was very cute, but remember that Sara is also his lobster.
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