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| sn0zb0z 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseNice story. Well done! |
| History Buff 1990 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good. It was so sweet, I can't quite put my finger on the word I wanna use, so this won't really be a complete review, but this was a great one-shot, very nicely constructed, very pleasing to read, it flowed exquisitely, I just loved it. Well done, this was an excellent piece, I can't wait to see what else you're capable of in this fandom (focusing on Chris if possible, lol). |
| MidnightLightning36 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet. Complete fluff, it made me smile. I really don't care what you were watching or who gave the look, I'm just glad you watched it. :D |
| GreenLily474 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a nice one shot. The prose is slightly awkward in a couple places, but for the most part this is a very nice read. It's certainly I nice change for all the fics where Piper and Leo are horrible parents. We didn't see it a whole lot on the show (stupid Billie), but there are certainly a lot of brief moments that indicate that Leo is a doting father to Chris in the Good Wyatt future. |
| Brown-Eyed Angel1234 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, i thought this was going to be a really stupid one shot, but it is really sweet. I loved it. |
| ujyfvc 2007-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abusecomplete already? |
| Sarah 2007-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWho's Pipper? |