Reviews for The World at War

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Chris ShadowMoon 2008-02-05 ch 9,	abuseI LOVE this story. I really wish you hadn't give up. It's one of my favorites..
SSJ Guyver1 2007-05-11 ch 9,	abuseDamn shame this story is dead,... It was just starting to get good. I love WoT and Ranma½, and the fact that Ranma is (in all sense of the word) a tainted one, how will the tower attempt at his life. Also, what kind of demons are going to appear in THIS world lol. Wish you would update, but you probably fell off the face of the internet.
Sdarian 2007-05-05 ch 9,	abuseI really enjoyed this story and the one before it. I hope you come back and write more on it. Good job on what you have written.
0K0 2007-04-01 ch 9,	abusegreat fic
The Chair Leg of Truth 2006-06-17 ch 9,	abuseAny group of people I have ever seen at conventions discussing fanfics know about you and loathe you. Not because you are a bad writer, no, the opposite. You are too good to have quit. There, I have said my peace. Now I can move on and never look back to your profile.
Blackdex 2006-04-08 ch 9,	abuseNO, I thought I had another chapter, PLEASE tell me that your still working on this, it hasn’t been updated in years, or that’s what the counter says, well, I owe you a review, the story here seems a little less thought out than it was earlier, id rate this as noticeably poor compared to the last piece, but still well above average. I can’t help but wonder of the thoroughness of your storyboarding, their is little, if any, foreshadowing, and some plot devices seem to pop up out of nowhere, or seem to be created and discarded before their conclusion. I mean no disrespect, it just seems a little more rushed than I would have preferred, I remember some of your chapters that you commented were done in two hours, they were better on average. However, the story remains engaging, and I really do want to see it concluded, eventually. All in all, it is a very good piece, and I am glad I took the time to read it through. Ciao
Mesterio 2005-11-14 ch 9,	abuseThis is the same chapter as the last one... was that a mistake or are your trying to prove a point or something?
ss4-link 2005-08-19 ch 3,	abuseWell with the constant ravaging by the Allaince it probably won't take much longer for the world to discover the other sources of the virusses but why not also at some of the RE4 evil and bring the villagers. Great chapter it would in my opinion be better for her to take the century idea since the "Time and Space Gates"'s time flows faster than on earth it will be faster than a century for Ranma but a century none the less for the poison to be impotent. Great chapter I loved it. Until next time keep up the good work, wonderful humor and dark presence.
ss4-link 2005-08-19 ch 2,	abuseDude god/Kami-sama/Buhdda/... does not have a last name he only made them to make people confused and such plus it is much easier than searching through 10,0 Micheals or something. Great chapter loved it as usual. Until next time keep up the good work and wonderful humor.
ss4-link 2005-08-18 ch 1,	abuseGreat chapter wonderful humor, the poor elder oh well. Until next time keep up the good work.
DCWestby 2005-07-26 ch 9,	abusehmm... did you post the same chapter twice? Seems like you did... Anyway.. good story and hope you keep writing.
a fan 2004-08-26 ch 9, anon.	abuseyou should think about ranma going to the harry potter universe and meeting with snape the potions master and helpong hime kick against everyone else. dumbledore is an , harry a stupod moron, volde would be fun to kick around.
luuuucifer 2004-05-17 ch 1,	abusekick ** story! too bad it look abandoned.
shodei 2004-04-21 ch 8, anon.	abusedude you loaded the same chapter twice. thats just not cool. hurry up and upload the next one, this is getting good, plus i want to see how rand reacts to him
dogbertcarroll 2003-11-01 ch 9,	abuseHey, this is just a copy of chapter 8. Update! I want to see how this turns out.

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