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Dlikee
2008-10-31 . chapter 9
loved the first story, and enjoying the second, hope you will return to it one day, like to see how ranma will get out of the damed immortality he messed up on, and see ami return as well.
moritynz
2008-09-02 . chapter 9
Good read this... hope you get around to updating soon would really like to see the end of the tale you've spun
Asgeras
2008-05-23 . chapter 9
Dang...I really hope to see an update in the not-so-distant future. Really. Real life getting in the way is no excuse for not continuing this fic (waggles finger at author).

I'm joking...somewhat. :P

Just like Can it Get Any Worse, this fic was rather enjoyable to read, if a bit on the morbid side of things. Having Ranma head to...the Aes Sedai world (don't know the name) is turning out to be quite fun. I kind of hope to see him messing with people's minds soon. Both the good guys and the bad guys. Oh, and before I forget, the whole 'tell your darkest secret' spell was rather ingenious. Kudos.

Let's see...critiques, critiques...once again, I don't have too many. Let's go back to the whole Amazon situation, I guess. I found it rather odd that Cologne is chiding the council about possibly angering another sorcerer, having not learned their lesson with Ranma. Well, not that the thought was odd. It was quite logical. I just thought it was odd that she didn't so much as voice her concerns. It could be she did so in order to maintain her level of power, but...I don't know. She's currently the undisputed head of the Amazons. She should, at the very least, be able to express her opinion, if it has at least a somewhat solid basis. (shrug)

Once again, love the fic and hope to see more in the future. No matter what the case though, thanks for releasing what you've written so far.
Chris ShadowMoon
2008-02-05 . chapter 9
I LOVE this story. I really wish you hadn't give up. It's one of my favorites..
SSJ Guyver1
2007-05-11 . chapter 9
Damn shame this story is dead,... It was just starting to get good. I love WoT and Ranma½, and the fact that Ranma is (in all sense of the word) a tainted one, how will the tower attempt at his life. Also, what kind of demons are going to appear in THIS world lol.

Wish you would update, but you probably fell off the face of the internet.
Sdarian
2007-05-05 . chapter 9
I really enjoyed this story and the one before it. I hope you come back and write more on it. Good job on what you have written.
0K0
2007-04-01 . chapter 9
great fic
The Chair Leg of Truth
2006-06-17 . chapter 9
Any group of people I have ever seen at conventions discussing fanfics know about you and loathe you. Not because you are a bad writer, no, the opposite. You are too good to have quit. There, I have said my peace. Now I can move on and never look back to your profile.
Blackdex
2006-04-08 . chapter 9
NO, I thought I had another chapter, PLEASE tell me that your still working on this, it hasn’t been updated in years, or that’s what the counter says, well, I owe you a review, the story here seems a little less thought out than it was earlier, id rate this as noticeably poor compared to the last piece, but still well above average. I can’t help but wonder of the thoroughness of your storyboarding, their is little, if any, foreshadowing, and some plot devices seem to pop up out of nowhere, or seem to be created and discarded before their conclusion. I mean no disrespect, it just seems a little more rushed than I would have preferred, I remember some of your chapters that you commented were done in two hours, they were better on average. However, the story remains engaging, and I really do want to see it concluded, eventually. All in all, it is a very good piece, and I am glad I took the time to read it through. Ciao
Mesterio
2005-11-14 . chapter 9
This is the same chapter as the last one... was that a mistake or are your trying to prove a point or something?
ss4-link
2005-08-19 . chapter 3
Well with the constant ravaging by the Allaince it probably won't take much longer for the world to discover the other sources of the virusses but why not also at some of the RE4 evil and bring the villagers. Great chapter it would in my opinion be better for her to take the century idea since the "Time and Space Gates"'s time flows faster than on earth it will be faster than a century for Ranma but a century none the less for the poison to be impotent. Great chapter I loved it. Until next time keep up the good work, wonderful humor and dark presence.
ss4-link
2005-08-19 . chapter 2
Dude god/Kami-sama/Buhdda/... does not have a last name he only made them to make people confused and such plus it is much easier than searching through 10,0 Micheals or something. Great chapter loved it as usual. Until next time keep up the good work and wonderful humor.
ss4-link
2005-08-18 . chapter 1
Great chapter wonderful humor, the poor elder oh well. Until next time keep up the good work.
DCWestby
2005-07-26 . chapter 9
hmm... did you post the same chapter twice? Seems like you did...

Anyway.. good story and hope you keep writing.
a fan
2004-08-26 . chapter 9
you should think about ranma going to the harry potter universe and meeting with snape the potions master and helpong hime kick ** against everyone else. dumbledore is an **, harry a stupod moron, volde would be fun to kick around.
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