MM: I cant believe that more people didn't review. Well-

SF: MAY THE BEARDED CRAZY MONKEYS HAUNT THEM!

MM: ok...

That was wonderfly written. The web site is great too. Please keep up the good work!

Very interesting story, but I really wonder if it's wise to throw in so much Japanese? Shifting between two different languages too often disorients and alienates the reader.

Though a little too bizarre for my tastes, I still think this fic is written wonderfully. Nice job with it.

Morbid indeed! As I said before, your writing style is wonderful, you obviously put much more time into your chapters than I have in My recent ones. The killing people I could do without, but if you must, you must, just don't make it pointless. Um, one thing you forgot however, Fuu knows a spell that can simply immobilize an enemy, like she did when she revived her mashine. You could use that to make alterations, but if the deaths of the characters are important to the story, than that won't work. Any who, keep at it. Love your stuff!

This is really good! And no, I don't hate you for turning Presea into a violent maniac who has self-hate problems. That just makes her all the more interesting!

If you love fluffy fics why don't you try writing a sappy one? I write poetry, sappy stuff (that I usually get rid of later) helps me clear my mind for the darker, more thoughtful poem that I enjoy much, much more!

Well, what are you waiting for, reading my long review? You should be writing more!

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HOOOOEEE! This is such an excellent story! But angsty, very angsty. And what do you mean, Ascot is the brother? And Lantis! Umi! Waemie! WAAAAAAAAH! T.T! You can't just kill them off... That ain't fair! But I still love this story...

Wow! I've never enjoyed a dark fic so much! Keep writing!

-_-; TOOK you long enough... i think i'll tell everyone all the spoilers you told me!... okay, maybe not, but only because i'm too lazy. :P well. freaky plot twist! :9 ascotto-sama... brother? O_o; you didn't mention THAT to me. ::falls up the stairs:: ANGEL SENT ME HIS ADDRESS! WUAA HA HAAA! ::blinks:: gomen. i miss my mexican hottie. X9;;

I really like this fanfic. And that's saying a lot, 'cause I'm normally so

damned critical of everything. If you don't keep writing it, I'll kick your arse,

just like I like Nicole-chan's arse everyday.

write some more

Heya! I like it so far, I'm gonna read some more now!

Good job Aiko-chan! su-chan sent me a link to your story and I enjoyed it very much, you're a wonderful author! Personaly, I'm glad you didn't make it a Tenchi fic, Rayearth isn't as mainstream so there aren't as many fics to read. I also liked how you took the time to make up things for Cephiro, it was great how you acknowledged it *is* another planet and gave it different games, plants, and food, kudos for that. Since you are such a wonderful artist (I love all the work I've seen from you) I'm expecting to see a picture of Presea and her new get up, I imagine she would look quite good. Keep writing!

waaiii! _ well, i would tell ya all the sugoi shtuff i like about this, but i have already, nee-chan! 0 kakkoii work as always!... ::chanting along with a bunch of chibi-fuus:: kunpuu, kunpuu, kunpuu, kunpuu... XD