Ere, the death of a candle, when hence no life strike forth from the chorusing shadows that greedily devour forth all in visionary sight...
Ah...this was very good. Fantastic, really. I've written about 18 TMNT fictions on other sites...but this does give a profound statement in a blinding poem-
The warrior's road can be a dark one. And life is swept somewhere someway away...

I really like your poems and the style of writing seemed to draw me in - very good work

I really liked this peom. I write poems just like it. Its not posted on my archive though. You should keep going...it was that hard you shouldn't put so much effort into something and then stop. You have a wonderful gift of doing poems...I can see it already. *Stares* I describes how your mind thinks beyond.

encouragement from: RT

This was an awesome poem, Pi. You're very good at poetry. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

wow! i can't write any sort of poem for the life of me! But this was well written! i liked it!

Two things
1) Love it, honestly one of the best poems ive read in a long time
and 2)could you send me the story id for Underdark?

Awesome.
Keep up your good work- Writing is your god-given talent.

very cool I loved it! Angel x

Wow this is a great piece of poetry that you have written, Pi. I love it!


I enjoyed reading it very much!

I hope that you will write more poetry someday for TMNT!

Good job.

Hey, I thought it flowed just fine :D I don't normally read poetry, but I really liked that one, great job! I also like the fact that you didn't limit it to one villian--as Leo takes each threat as serious as the next. Can't wait to read the next one :D