Reviews for A Fragile Innocence

Shaitanah 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abuseIt's really heartbreaking. Love this deep insight into that tragic scene.
Sirnonenath 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abuseThis made me tear up a little bit; you really captured the defeat and despair of Shawn in that last scene with his brother. And, very nice use of 2nd person.
Molecular 12 2007-09-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, i like it. its insainly short, yet oddly its actually a satisfying story. good job! :D adding more?
LoneTread 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseWow. That scene was amazing, and you certainly did it justice here. Those last lines in particular were just perfect. Great job. (You did misspell "Shawn" in the summary, though. Might want to fix that.)
exitlight 2007-09-16 ch 1,	abuseI love it and that scene made me cry.