AWSOME...nothing to add cuz it was awsome

are they becoming lezvbbiens?

Im falling inlove with this story.. seriously... i could only dream of writing the way you do... its like DAM that DAK is awsome. and im reading ur story over and over again

Update nao. :)

More chapters please :P
At least Alex didn't injure the other arm.

Whha~? Are those thank yous all for moi? My, I'm flattered. ;D

Short chapter though it was, it was entertaining as always. Though I really wonder what the deal with David was in the beginning...the cloaks made me think of Death Eaters from Harry Potter, amusingly enough. Lol.

Loved the scenes with Jackie and Alex. They're so cute. But is Joni a guy or a girl? If s/he's from an earlier chapter, I forgot...hah, maybe I'm as forgetful as Alex, eh? XD

Ah, I'm getting flashbacks of Dumbledore in HP from the mention of Grendal's speech, lol. /tard

What's the next chapter gonna be about, I wonder? Update soon, I'll be waiting! Impatiently, mind you. D:

love the story so far, and you've made some great characters
hm i wondering if rick likes alex
lol nice story mate keep up the great work :)

Why didn't you get any reviews? You're a good writer who uses words well. Jeez.

Lmao--pile of drool. XD

Damn, Jackie got kinda pissy didn't she? Alex's not much of a morning person either, it seems...that probably didn't help, lol. Agh, you must update soon! I'll be watching you!

Lol, Jackie was still mad. Cute. And oh-ho, a mysterious person at the door? o:
Only one chapter left...no~!

Aw, Jackie cares! That scar though...seems like somethin' else. And what will Jackie's reaction be when she sees it, I wonder? Hm...I can only keep reading. :3

A few minor spelling mistakes, but Jackie and Alex are getting closer and that is complete win in my opinion. Must...read...next chapter...

Excellent, I say! I thought it was amusing how Jackie noticed Alex's mistake and Rick didn't, too. Loved this chapter. It just keeps getting better and better, doesn't it?

Awh, that ending was adorable. :3

It took me like a minute and a half to remember what "ks" meant. I was like, "Man, where did I hear that? What did that mean again?" Then it was like, "OH YEAH, KILL-STEALER. Bastards." Yeah, I had that happen to me a few times when I used to play...man, that was annoying. Good chapter.

I didn't get the reference. It makes me sayud. D:

BUT! I did enjoy the whole Jackie and Rick trying to get Alex's attention. Personally I'm rooting for Jackie...