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| HonestNinja123 2008-07-19 ch 17,  | abuseMore chapters please :P At least Alex didn't injure the other arm. |
| Djevel 2008-04-16 ch 15, | abuseWhha~? Are those thank yous all for moi? My, I'm flattered. ;D Short chapter though it was, it was entertaining as always. Though I really wonder what the deal with David was in the beginning...the cloaks made me think of Death Eaters from Harry Potter, amusingly enough. Lol. Loved the scenes with Jackie and Alex. They're so cute. But is Joni a guy or a girl? If s/he's from an earlier chapter, I forgot...hah, maybe I'm as forgetful as Alex, eh? XD Ah, I'm getting flashbacks of Dumbledore in HP from the mention of Grendal's speech, lol. /tard What's the next chapter gonna be about, I wonder? Update soon, I'll be waiting! Impatiently, mind you. D: |
| Joveh 2008-04-11 ch 15, anon. | abuselove the story so far, and you've made some great characters hm i wondering if rick likes alex lol nice story mate keep up the great work :) |
| Randomness from Boredom (la... 2008-04-05 ch 15, anon. | abuseWhy didn't you get any reviews? You're a good writer who uses words well. Jeez. Lmao--pile of drool. XD |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 14, | abuseDamn, Jackie got kinda pissy didn't she? Alex's not much of a morning person either, it seems...that probably didn't help, lol. Agh, you must update soon! I'll be watching you! |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 13, | abuseLol, Jackie was still mad. Cute. And oh-ho, a mysterious person at the door? o: Only one chapter left...no~! |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 12, | abuseAw, Jackie cares! That scar though...seems like somethin' else. And what will Jackie's reaction be when she sees it, I wonder? Hm...I can only keep reading. :3 |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 11, | abuseA few minor spelling mistakes, but Jackie and Alex are getting closer and that is complete win in my opinion. Must...read...next chapter... |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 10, | abuseExcellent, I say! I thought it was amusing how Jackie noticed Alex's mistake and Rick didn't, too. Loved this chapter. It just keeps getting better and better, doesn't it? |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 9, | abuseAwh, that ending was adorable. :3 It took me like a minute and a half to remember what "ks" meant. I was like, "Man, where did I hear that? What did that mean again?" Then it was like, "OH YEAH, KILL-STEALER. Bastards." Yeah, I had that happen to me a few times when I used to play...man, that was annoying. Good chapter. |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 8, | abuseI didn't get the reference. It makes me sayud. D: BUT! I did enjoy the whole Jackie and Rick trying to get Alex's attention. Personally I'm rooting for Jackie... |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 7, | abuse;salkfd';klsd ALEX. You must not kill her. D< Of course I know you won't, since she's the main character, but still! NO. It would kill me if the next chapter hadn't already been posted. XD |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 6, | abusePoor Alex...D: But Jackie is kickass. |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 5, | abuseI have to say I thoroughly enjoyed Jackie's test. :D I think she's becoming my favorite character...and after only a few chapters, too! |
| Djevel 2008-03-27 ch 4, | abuseIt wasn't until I read this chapter that I realized how much easier playing the game has helped me to understanding the setting of the story. Meso, the training thing...ah, it almost makes me want to play again. |