Spectacular.
Stunning vocabulary and a great story.
Keep up the good work!

so, i was a little confused when i first read this, but i think i get it now. nicely done

Whoo. O.o Very eerie and very well-written. I had no idea what was going on through most of it, but I'm guessing that was intentional. ^^;

Anyway, good job!

Slightly confusing at times but it all came together in the end. I loved it. It was twisted and erotic and... Just plain beautiful! (In the sadistic way that I enjoy! XD)

Very nice.

Well this was an intoxicating read. I absolutely love your writting style. It made me tremble with excitment and awe. The imagery is just fantastic. It's like looking at a beautifully macarbe painting. Well done, and many many kudos.

Yes! *punches air* I LOVE this story - I didn't realise you had it on too!
...*crickets*...
Oh, right. *sheepish* This is Avashida, from livejournal (the one who asked you for some Saix/Demyx). Get it? Siav's an anagram of Avashida...
Yeah. *sheepish* Anyways, thanks for the profile link, and just to let you know that I LOVE this story! :D

At the beginning I was like, "What the fuck is this person talking about? D:"

And then halfway through I was like, "Oh. Oh, okay." And I caught like, every other word. That was confusing for my poorl ittle brain. ;^;

Wow, this gave me a shivery feeling. It very good, I love your voice, you have a very interesting way of wording things and it's great. It, and the whole fic, make me think of Poppy Z. Brite's books.

i liked how this story turned out, the angst fitting the setting and feelings very well. LOVED how the story flowed. XD

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful, in that disgusting sort of way. I really enjoyed this. And the little lesson on poison at the end was a nice touch.


Spectacular job.

Oh my, what a gorgeous little story.
So much detail and it appears that you worked hard on it, it certainly paid off. I love the dark theme of the story, and this is one of my favorites on the site now.
When I was reading it, all of your details seemed to lock into place in this little image I had going in my head; and believe me, I loved the image I was creating. This one is very unique, and my favorite line was,
"that ugly fire so unworthy of the light’s touch.
But he touched and touched anyway, carrying the soaked carcass back to the bed and skinning him raw with his tongue..."
and
"And when Roxas finally plunged into the rabbit’s burrow, he found no clocks or statistics or chimes or warped little images of a child’s playmate. He only discovered the redhead jolted like a dirty skeleton in a hallowed grave..."
There are a few others that were exceptionally good, but I cant name them all.
Well thank you, and I truley enjoyed your story.

That, my dear, was probably the most twisted thing I have ever read. And I read a fic with with a necrophiliac (I spelled that wrong I think). I love this, I want more. It's twisted beyond belief and poetic and even kind of sexy. The darkness is erotic and sucks you in, it's brillant. Thanks for writing it. Have a fantastic day!

Amazing. [: