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Reviews for: A Foolish Offering
Roni-chan
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
This was scaring O.o I doubt Ren would have taken anything from her which she hadn't offered, yet... he knowing much, while she doesn't... well, in her place, I would get frightened, even if I did love Ren the way she did.
I liked this piece, hope there'll be more :)
yours,
Roni-chan
Katherine Moonhawk
2008-07-26 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh! Fantastic, what's gonna happen? I remeber how ren was when pin mei died in gift of love, wow, this is really good! God, i think I might be turning into a fan of your fanfics (shrugs) oh well, they're good, please update soon!
Kat
Setsumi-san
2007-11-23 . chapter 2
Whoa! That was powerful for a vignette! I'm guessing Ren was hit trying to save her. Cool!
PearlaH.Sweden
2007-11-22 . chapter 2
oh! dont kill pin-mei!
UPDATE!
=D
pearla-chan
Suliac Griffin
2007-11-22 . chapter 2
Erm...meow.

Just reviewing for the heck of it here, you and three other of my favourite authors posted within one day of each other; pretty long, dramatic chapters, so it was nice to cool down with something soft and short.
For some reason, I got a disturbing memory...of the first episode. Or the second. Or the third, can't quite remember which; but I do remember a truck, traffic lights...and a Kwan Dao. I know it probably wasn't intentional, but the scene is pretty similar. :O
Setsumi-san
2007-09-17 . chapter 1
SQUEE! RENMEI, RENMEI, RENMEII!! ^0^ Jezzy-sama, I love them together and am overjoyed to see more stories about them. (faves)
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