These phase shots are hilarious! I'm really looking forward to reading more! Maybe a remake of the Quotes one with someone who knows where the quotes come from? Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Pretty interesting. The artist one reminded me of an episode of M*A*S*H (at least until the humor kicked in ;). I really enjoyed the quote chapter, and if I read correctly, you're planning on an HSM (raises eyebrow)-themed one. Here's an idea: expand that to include all aspects of theatre, such as lighting technitians, prop crew (we almost always have to wear black), scriptwriting and directing, as well as acting and singing. Perhaps the Fuher is visiting (or is Roy in this position in your story?) and they plan to put on a play for him/her. Avoid cliches if possible.
In regard to the collection overall, I find the exploration of self intriguing, though I wonder if Ed will have some introspection about these arbitrary changes he's making in his life. Also, I notice a few odd typos in the verbs, but all in all, great work!
Take care,
~September's Nobara.

New idea for Phases! Ed = Mock Victorian!

But... the military uniforms cover up everything... hm...

I'm sure you'll think of something. ^_^

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nagging phase

bossy phase

and "What If..." phase (I actually had this phase.)

good story/ random one shots

"Ohh the pain I feel! I wear black because I want to hide in the crevasses of life! My soul is dead! Dead! Dead! I am not alive. My pulse is gone! Can you see! I'm in pain! I feel hated by everyone! In fact, I'm going to sit my wrists after this! So I can die! Blood is my tears! I will cry from my wrist as I die!" Roy ended briefly. Suddenly the audience was clapping rapidly, and some actually let out cries of joy



Again, process from sneering to laughing began. It took a step further to where Roy was bending over and then crumpled on the floor from laughing so hard. They used a push broom to move him off.


That made me laugh.

Uh.. I dunno how many times i've died while reading this... But it comes close to 'bout a hundred XD!! Update soon:P

ur comment on the chapter was funny.

I was laughing alot wen the image of Roy riding a five-yr-old's motorcycle in my head.ah nice! :D

Poor poor Roy

Whoa

say what??

Roy Mustang the Ignorant Alchemist

Okay first of all...WHAT THE HELL? Thats not a phase...hes been possessed!

When Ed pinned Roy against the wall...that kind of a turn on..

OH! I like Narrates other people's lives and talks in third person!!