Oh, this was dark. Yaten is dangerous but somehow, you managed to make him a very sexy stalker of Mina ;)

-hearts!-

Cheers,
~Hazel*

How utterly...dangerous...it feels to read your writing sometimes! Throughout this entire piece I felt this threatening undercurrent, and it was so much more pronounced because of Yaten's detachment. A flawless character piece, and your turn of phrase oftentimes turns my brain on a dime and leaves me breathless. Such mastery!

And props to the title, too. ^_^ (shameless plug, I've got my own fic by that title, with a completely different take on the myth. Funny thing, inspiration, ne?)

Wow, that´s angsty. Yaten´s obsession for Minako and wanting her "still" and "unreal" is very well portrayed.
This is a masterpiece!

O.o
Still don´t know, how I couldn´t see this masterpiece immediatly.
The first time I read it,it was briefly.
Now, I read it a second time, understood and finally reviewed.
^^
It would be really great if you would write a sequel to it or more Yaten/Minako storys in this style of writing.
;)

I love it, it's so like him... this is so WONDERFUL! I know this is a one shot but please update ... please! i'm a big fan of mina yaten fics and this is truly great ^-^ ...

It´s beautiful. I honestly don´t understand why you don´t have more reviews. It´s such a profund and brilliant look into Yaten´s head! I really, really loved it!