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Reviews for: Cause and Effect
Vanilla Slash
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
This definately earns it title of 'horror'. Totally creepy, and excellently presented, as always. ^^ Those scars on Harry's face are very distinct to your storyline, and Hermione's unsteady walk is, too. Fantasticly dark!
pstibbons
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
Ah, bliss! This Hermione's insanity is truly scary and magnifique.

Was Shack Harry in disguise?

Best lines:

H G:“It’s cause and effect. You keep us apart – that’s the cause – and I’ll watch as my Smiling Man snaps your bones – that’s the effect.”

C L:“Did you have anything to do with her apparent murder?”
H G:“How can it be only ‘apparent’ you dimwit? The bitch’s entrails were strung about the house. Is there some natural cause that will make people expel their intestines that I don’t know about?”

The one who was the first to rape me; he didn’t like eating his own genitals – the expression he made was priceless, but he didn’t have a choice in the matter.
Mini-Chobi
2008-01-01 . chapter 1
... holy shit.

Hermione's gone insane O.O And what's Kingsley playing at - letting her go?
No Tama
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
To be truly honest this series of oneshots are really good, I truly like reading it, this one was awesome like the others before ... hope to read another chap in this storyline.

And keep on with this side of you as a writer is really good.
irish gal 2
2007-09-20 . chapter 1
Man, these things can be so disturbing but, they are written so well!
Ultimate Auror
2007-09-17 . chapter 1
I love you. I love you. I love you.

While this one was not as action packed as the others, the creep value was still mile high. The torn emotions that Hermione experiences throughout the interview is captivating. The tears, the insanity, the loss, the madness, the calmness. Gives me the chills all over again.

I wonder why Kingsley was foolish enough to remove her. Not like it would have mattered anyway, they would have found each other eventually. But do they really think that they can save the fallen hero's? Is there really any hope left for them? I don't think so...

Can't wait to get to the next installment, your ability to depict fear and gore across the pages is beautifully sinful. I await your next move.

Love,

Court

PS - Don't forget about SoG, I still love that one too! :o)
Meteoricshipyards
2007-09-17 . chapter 1
Quite horrific.

Too bad Hermione and Harry have gone from killing those who deserve it to those who don't.

Personally, I think this has about run it's course. It's time for the end; either they die or are healed. But that's my opinion.

Thanks for writing this.
SomeGuyFawkes
2007-09-17 . chapter 1
Twisted and fascinating, like watching a pickup splatter a schoolgirl.

Harry and Hermy are moving from being insane, but still mostly righteous and likable, to evil minor dark-lords.

If they killed Majorette Borge, they've crossed the line for sure.

Don't make us want to put the diabolical duo down. What will they be? Gory goombahs or rabid miscreants who should be killed on sight?
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