Love it. I'm a Ten/Rose shipper, but this is extremely well written. An awesome story :)

-fan girl squeel- Okay that was for you. I didn't know you wrote Doctor Wo fanfictions, too! I guess thats what I get for not checking peoples profiles.

Rather like the story. I think the Martha dynamic is unique compared to the Rose one. Personally I'm not a fan of either, I'm more of a Doctor/OC character cause I can't really see him with either. I love the way you portrayed them though. Great job.

Human Nature and Family of Blood were a couple of my favorite episodes. I think you did a good job capturing Martha's despair. I hope you write more.

I felt so bad for Martha during "Human Nature" and "Family of Blood" and this definately resonated with me. Martha was definately in character. I loved this, you've got great potential as a writer (a lot better than I could do! lol.) I'd love to read more of your writing! Fantastic job!

no afence but its rubbish with only 1 ting little bit mention of rose to much gay martha

Oh, I loved this episode! This is really good, I really love it!