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| Keggers 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseUPDATE! |
| winkywoo2008 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was great, i don't need soldier description, i got the game, but the location info wouldn't kill ya, would it? Good job and check out my story |
| Bl1zz4rd M4n 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseDon't mind the other guy. I thought your story was good enough. Good detail. I could almost see the whole picture in my head. Though, I was still wondering where he was at. |
| The Black Dawn 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... You have to learn to take your time, explain were he was, what he was thinking, his name, a little discribtion and mention a plot. I would scrap this story and move on with another one. |