OMG LOVE IT!

Amazing peice. very real; very plausible. I loved it.

Very good.

Only a few minor errors with people standing or sitting, and mixing those things up.

Otherwise, awesome.

Uh..

Morpheus and Trinity... that is just... wrong. In a deep and twisted way.

I LOVED IT!

Okay, um, ew. Trinity and Morpheus, just... *shudders* No. But whatever, that was cute and all. Disturbing but cute.

Damn, it's been so long since you wrote any Matrix fanfiction. I wish you'd write more.

Awww... that was cute! I don't like the word lover, but that is just me. It is the same as my roommate not liking the word ointment because of the way it sounds! Well, anyways... Great story. I don't know if I believe that Trin and Morpheus were lovers, but your story is believable.

sniff... that was sooo sweet. Don't ever stop writing, you're a natural.

Whoa... not sure where that storyline came from... maybe I should talk to the rhetorical theorist... And yes, Neo *can* be a ditz at times, can't he? :)

that was a pretty phat story. cool, lked it a lot.

all i can say is damn that was good!

Awwww. (warm and fuzzy feeling) I LOVED IT! That was sooo cool, great job!

Really sweet. This is a really good story which keeps the characters in, well, in character!