amazing... hahaha! love love the concept! thank for writing

Nice!

I love their banter. This is such a hilarious story with a nice touch of HimuraxMamori at the end. x3

Hehehehe, I dissolved into giggles at the end of that. The back and forth banter was fantastic, and Hiruma's final line was perfect. Excellent work and a very fun read! :)

well-written. :) the dialogue is good, especially hiruma's part. and the last line is a winner...

That last line was excellent, a nice little aside and a confirmation of what you were building up between the pair throughout the story

lol they really do make a good couple though lol hahahahahahahahah so hurry up and write more stories!

I was wondering why this was in my e-mail again. Always a joy to re-read good ficiton though ^_^

Way f@#king nice. KEKEKE!

Can I make a request? Dear author?

Can u make another Hiruma and Mamori story. One shot or not. It's better if not one shot though.

There are few of them out here in ffnet. The rest is YAOI.

PLEASE!? I'M BEGGING U!! I'M PRACTICALLY KNEELING HERE.!! PLEASE!
oNEGAI?