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| siddika 2007-09-19 ch 6,  | abuseGood job. |
| Pandorama 2007-09-18 ch 5, | abuseNot trying to nitpick - though it may seem like it. Pratt's mother died when he was a kid. That was a large part of his storyline in s12/s13 with his biological father. Loved the line "pompous little douche". Very amusing. |
| siddika 2007-09-18 ch 5, | abuseGood job. |
| dshortklutz 2007-09-17 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. Please update soon. |
| siddika 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abuseGood job. |
| siddika 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseNice start. |
| Pandorama 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abuseIt's a nice start. Only thing is, nurses can't put in chest tubes or use scalpels. But other than that, it looks good. |
| DocRock06 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abuseHey! I just finished reading this over at ERHQ's yesterday and now i found it here! I can read a great story twice! DockRock06 |
| dshortklutz 2007-09-17 ch 3, | abuseNice chapters, I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon. |
| dshortklutz 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseNice start, I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon. |