Interesting concept. It was well written and very entertaning.

Hello Thar, you wonderful story writer! This was a magnificent read, very well constructed and dramatic! I ended up realizing I was crying by the end of it! I commend you for your ability to write!

so sad!
poor russ! XO

I get this claustrophobic feeling when people haunt me, so I figured I'd leave a rewiev Oo
That was just plain amazing ._. I still like RoyxEd the most, but I was utterly shocked and disappointed when there were only three completed, m-rated RusselxEd fics in here ._. So I had to read them all, and to be honest, this was the only one that was really good ._.
So I salute you, for writing a wonderful yaoi-story, and for actually writing RusselxEd. xD Oh, and I really like the way you write. Not just the plot, but you're a good writer, and that is definetly a good thing.

That was interesting! And sad. I have only read one fic before with this pairing. Brave of you to do it! Hehah.
Stop flaming yourself, girl. It was well written.
Keep up the good work!

that was a really good story you have a great style of writing even though it was kinds of cheezy it was still awsome

Hey, it's your Edward!

I love it. So much.

OMGZ
Elricest, Flussel & EdxRuss
ALL IN ONE FIC!
-grins-
Awesome :)
xx

“You sure you want this?” It was amazing Ed had the composure to ask. In the faint illumination from a single lantern, his body shown with a fresh sheen of sweat, mirroring Russell’s. Their bodies wracked with every breath.

“No. But God, just fuck me…”

Those two lines of dialogue just made me a happy happy girl--it adds a very nice streak of realism to this, keeping it out of he cookie-cutter land of stereotypes