Lovely, just... Lovely. I think you have some real skill. I actually adore fics that contain the loss of virginity to one's true love... Even in non-canon pairings... These two are the best couple to come out of Yugioh, and I think I found my favorite BakuraMarik writer! I don't yet have time for an account, but be prepared for more reviews from me... I might use a different name, this one is experamental. Just a few mistakes with subject-verb agreement, non-parallel sentences, and I think I saw like 2 or 3 spelling errors (tops). There might be more, but I only noticed these because we are studying grammar in class and I recently had to re-write entire pages full of sentences (tedious, trust me). Keep up the awesome work, and I hope to see you again!

P.S. I am so glad that you have the reviews open to everyone, I hate it when people say to leave reviews and then have closed reviews only. That gets really irritating. Thanks.

I usually like more violent fan fictions (not rape, but I hope you get what I'm saying), but this is probably one of the best fics I've ever read. Not just for Yu-gi-oh, but like..EVER. I loved how you described it (probably because I'm a huge pervert, lol) and used very descriptive words.

Keep on writing, you have a lot of potential <3

Love,

The Closet Lurker~

(Too lazy to log on)

I love it!

More!

That was absolutely great! I really was afraid to what was waiting at the end since you said it was something we should fear, yet I am really happy with that! I enjoyed the reading XD

Oh no, you ... cut off before the ... good things ehm, happend, yeah? Well, I think you shall write more, now yeah x'D I want more. Need more. Give me more.

Uhm, yeah, great work BTW.

That was so...short. But good. Please update.

cool story plz update soon

AW! no! update soon! please. i will love you forever if you do!

GAH! *wallops you* Why must you tease me so?!

I hope you update soon, I don't think I could handl mroe suspense...

Meany!

I really like this story.. Bakura has been known to be very violent but in this story he seems to be very understanding and patient when it comes to his wanting to have sex with Malik and yet he has allowed Malik to let him know when the time was right. Bakura is my kind of guy... Please update when you can...