I love this story but am confused by the pairings. Is Misato and Ritsuko together or are they just friends? Maya always seems to be a threat to a Rits/Miso pairing.

Yui is so cool, I'd like to see her pair up with someone.

I'm looking forward to the next update.

You have some interesting ideas for AU. This almost seems like a prequel for your other EVA fic, unless of course, the angels DO arrive early. The one jarring thing is that Ritsuko goes from black haired last chapter (her natural shade) to blonde (the shade she dies it) in this chapter during the middle of running away from her mother crying.
Otherwise it was fairly enjoyable.

Heheh.

Ha ha...yeah, she DID say "wife". Guess if she seemed surprised, she must've just meant that she saw herself as more of the stereotypical "male" role...and I can sort of see that. Beer-guzzling, slovenly, lazy...yeah, very stereotypically male. No wonder I immediately thought that she'd go both ways!

Uh, yeah. I'd say that.

Good chapter! ::chuckles:: And you're right. Poor Toji.

great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Nice second chapter. I can't wait to see how things begin to tie in.

A very interesting AU/AR for Evangelion. I like it so far.

this story is pretty good though their is one error chronologically speaking, gendo started his affair with naoko after yui disappear but only to build her emotion up enough so he could send rei 1, knowing what would happened, and he actually tried to stop seele version of third impact which would have seele rule the world as gods.

Hi again!

Now I have to say that this story is going to be something else, even with your AU Eva stories. It's good to see that you've got plenty of conflict here as well as romantic potential. Obviously there's Misato/Ritsuko, but there's a slight chance of Yui/Naoko (just to be crazy - mostly because Naoko acts so much like Gendo here).

Lots of interesting happenings, and the drama is good when it comes to Misato and Ritsuko (I'm just glad not to have her all over Gendo!).

See ya!
writer-jm

oh? this is very interesting, hmm, i think i like where this is going.