Very sweet. Love the last bit where he asks her to marry him...again. Love it!

oh sweet!! love it!

You have written a lovely story :o)

Oh, I quite like this! Starting off with the birth scene was unique, but then I felt so badly for poor heartbroken 7 yr old Gil. By the last verse, though, I was grinning like an idiot.

... “Will you marry me?”
She laughs again.
“I already did,” ...

Wonderful!

That was a bit confusing initially, but overall I loved it. It's so different from anything else I've read in quite a while. The writing was excellent and the form was unique. Great job.

I love this! At first I was completely confused, but now...it's a good confused. This story is exceptionally beautiful, there is something so poetic and so...lovely. I just can't explain it. Great job, love!

This one was definitely interesting.

Keep up the good work! =)

Radio 2 listener by any chance?

Beautiful fic.

aw that ending was so cute, hehe made me smile. great job that was really nice.

Such a lovely piece

You did it again! Sweet, lovely story! You know, I have always loved the way Grissomsm says "Sara", it feels so tender and intimate.

this was a wonderful idea.

Absolutely lovely and very imaginative. Loved it.

So sweet! Great job as always.

Aw, that was so cute! Thanks for sharing! :)