One thing i hate is when i spend hours on Fanfiction looking for a really really good story. Then i find out that auther hasn't updated the story in 5 months. seriouly this is an awesome story please update it.

:O! I read the whole thing ('cause I'm too lazy to comment on every chapter) and I LOVE IT. :D Even though the chapters ARE a little short... Still, lovelovelovelove. :D WRITE MORE!! >D ORDERS FROM DARK-SAMA!! >D

OMG! I love the last sentence! She's coming to her senses! YAY!
Poor Vincent...Poor Chaos! Lol.


Seriously, this chapter...AWESOMENESS

Keep writing! I NEED more! Lol
Love it.

Love, muchly xx

OMG THIS IS SO AWESOME!

It might be short, but omg, it's fantastic!
I can't wait to see what happens next! Poor Lillian...
Evil bastard be Hojo >:(

Vincent should just kill him, and be done with it, then he can concentrate on bringing Lillian back...or should he...*strokes beard* lol.

Have Hojo stand over him with Lillian's spear pointing at his neck, taunting him and being nasty about Lucrecia, and then have Vincent unleash Chaos, and completely obliterate the building.

That would ** rule.

You don't have to though. Just a suggestion (which happens to be awesome. Lol. Kidding)

Love muchly to you, and that great little mind of yours ;)

Oh sh-it, Vincent! XD

Maybe like...Hojo like...wanted to kill Vincent all those years ago, when he was like...weak or something.
And he's like...another of the brothers who tried to kill Cloud in the film...except he's far more evil, and exceedingly long lost. Haha.
Umm...yeah.

Nah, this was totally awesome!
That bit where they almost had sex...phwoar! You should get this published...or at least write SOMETHING for publishing.

You rock, Makakichitakito

*High Fives*

This was so hot. The bit when the girl went down on the other girl was just...
Oh wait, have I been watching something different?
This isn't a film?

Ah...

oh no oh no oh no
wats gonna happen? oh no
=D v. gord

O_O

OMG LULZ I WANT A COOKEH!
Sry, I'm slightly hyper right now. :D
Soz, you could make Vincent try to attack Hojo... and then get sedated or something...

Uwah~
Kewl, cliffhanger!!

Ooh, exciting!