I love this! *falls over and dies* SOOOOOO CUUUUTE! Zack Fair is dangerous! Poor Cloud never did have a chance. lol

PLEEEEASE WRITE MORE! I LOVE THE LESSONS! THEY'RE SO SWEET AND TOUCHING! *cries*

wow this is really cute.. XD

faved!

Awwww...that was so sweet!

CLOUD:: Is it over yet?

XD

Please come back and finish these. *hopeful face, offers up a cookie*

Haha! That was sweet. I needed that logic; it helps a LOT.

So cute! You do a great job of incorporating characters and ideas together!

Please update soon!

Great job, this is adorable and very funny!

Zack and Cloud are so cute.

OMG, the excruciating cuteness!

Your story is great! Update soon!

LOL! I SO love this story. Zack is just too funny! Wow, great, this story is too good! Update when you can, please? Pretty, pretty please? Well, until next time, Chinchilla out! (And if I did spell this animal's name wrong, I am so sorry.)

I like it. You do a pretty good job of keeping everyone in character, though Sephiroth is on the borderline of ooc.

Good use of vocabulary, good spelling and sentence structure, interesting dialogue with humour, and a fun concept for the story.

I hope you update.

Take care

::cracks up:: Poor Cloud, subject to being randomly dragged into Zack's schemes. It's all to help Sephy be more human, though, so cheer up, Spiky. :)

Lmfao! That was funny as all hell and so cute! I have to admit, I almost feared Cloud might have a crush on Sephiroth, now I think that due to the ending it must be Zack. Right? Yay! Well Zack obviously loves his Cloud! Anyway I love all your fics. Keep up the good work! By the way, I have a totally random question for you that has nothing to do with this fic so I probably shouldn't ask, but I will anyway. What do you think of the SephirothxGenesis pairing? I've noticed its been getting more popular latley and I like it and well, I guess I'm just curious as to what pairings you like. Feel free to ignore me if you find this odd.

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ARE YOU KIDDING? I LOVE THIS! I WAS CRACKING UP THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE CHAPTER! AMAZING JOB! UPDATE SOON!

lol, poor cloudy.

XD! LOL! that was GREAT!

lol, sephiroth!

poor wittle cloudy...