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agouraki 2008-07-24 ch 24, anon.	abusefine story thought i dont understand why in so many stories harry must be so young i mean omg with the family/cry/kiss stuff
Eskaybe4 2008-07-19 ch 24,	abuseVery enjoyable read!
Grave Wolf 2008-07-16 ch 24,	abuseOne of fey realy god fey crossovers!
Make-War-Not-Love 2008-07-11 ch 24,	abuseGreat story, cant wait for the next chapter. Make-War-Not-Love
SCREENSURFER 2008-07-07 ch 23, anon.	abuseok great story really, but you don't need to butcher everybody else's role in the film so Sabin can play hero all the time. Honestly yeah hes cool and all, but so is Daniel when hes super geeky, Sam when she's super smart, Teacl'c when he's super warrior, and Jack when he's super funny. When sabin is involved hes Super super super super sabin, and the others are just geeky smart warrior and funny. You take half of the good traits of the respective characters of the stargate universe and put them on Sabin. Give them some points already. "What are you doing Sabin" "Solving the riddle" That part is where DANIEL is supposed to shine NOT SABIN.
akuma-chan0326 2008-07-07 ch 24,	abusethis is cool as crap. i really do like this story, it continues to get even more interesting with every chapter you post.
Fae Child19 2008-06-29 ch 24,	abuseI think that using the Longbottoms was a stroke of genius. Terrific chapter!
Talenyn01 2008-06-28 ch 24,	abuseAwesome! I can't wait for more!
dead feather 2008-06-28 ch 24,	abuseThis is like watchin the series :)
Ater Phasma 2008-06-27 ch 24,	abuseWoo, exciting! How will you keep them alive? :D Cheers
hemotem 2008-06-27 ch 24,	abuseDid they make it?? I do hope so and you are so evil for a cliffie like that hehe Thank you for a great chapter and story and I hope to see more soon. Hemotem
Ravus7 2008-06-27 ch 24,	abuseI love your story update again soon!
Rokkis 2008-06-27 ch 24,	abusefew! wipes forehead of course Sabin and Jack are fine!! Must admit that I'm loving your Harry character more and more:) Cheers!
dhh 2008-06-26 ch 24, anon.	abuseAll I have to say is that, I hope you don't go down the 'cliche' of many HP fics..For instance, having HP go or attend Hogwarts will be one of them..Since, in your story, Sabin(Sabian) already has 300+ yrs of training and teaching and since your story is structured around Sabin(Sabian) being a ALREADY taught/learned individual and Guardian, I do hope you go on as is, and NOT have him go to school, which is pointless, IMOO, since, he's thy GUARDIAN, literally, and if you do have him attend school, I'll be so disappointed in this story, since the only reason you'll be going down that path is for HP being able to have a childhood or make friends or whatever, which then tells me, you're out of plot and ideas.. If god forbid you do go down the cliche and boring route, which school will he attend, since he's a PART of SG-1 and is the Guardian, he should attend school in the US or in the UK, which wouldn't make sense.. As for pairings..I don't even want to think about it, since you're a STRAIGHT author and NOT slash, and god, I hope you're not one of those authors who actually likes the two ** from HP world..You know whom I'm referring too. Since Sabin is still just 5 yrs of age and the whole APPEAL to this story..I'm not sure what you're going to do, age him in a chapter..God no!!
CSnow 2008-06-26 ch 24,	abuseGood story! Loved Sabin at Hogwarts--from kidnapping fawkes to dodgeorb! Great writing--I wonder where Sabin and Jack went?

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